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April 23, 2021

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Taken to the hospital

I attended a company information session yesterday. Thirty minutes after it started, my stomach and my back got to hurt because of my period. I have a bad PMS as usual, but I've never had such a heavy pain. In addition, I felt nauseous and dizzy even though I was sitting down. Finally, I got into blackness and got out of the room because I couldn't endure it anymore. Then, I went straight to the bathroom and I threw up and had stomach trouble repeatedly for twenty minutes. I started to shiver and couldn't stand up by myself because there was no strength in my leg. After that, I was taken to the hospital in an ambulance. I was given an I.V. and after sleeping for a few hours, it felt much better. The doctor said the main cause is anemia due to my period and maybe I had been stressed because of job hunting. It was the first time to be taken in an ambulance, so it was a little scary. Through this experience, I have to take care of myself more and sometimes take a rest.

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Taken to the hHospital

Capitalise all words in a title, aside from more minor words

I attended a company information session yesterday.

Thirty minutes after it started, my stomach and my back gotstarted to hurt because of my period.

I have ad bad PMS as usual, but I've never had such a heavy pain.

In addition, I felt nauseous and dizzy even though I was sitting down.

Finally, I got inbegan to blacknessout and got out ofleft the room because I couldn't endure it anymore.

Then, I went straight to the bathroom and I, threw up to and had terrible stomach trouble repeatedly for twenty minutes.

I started to shiver and couldn't stand up by myself because there was no strength in my legs.

After that, I was taken to the hospital in an ambulance.

I was given an I.V. and felt much better after sleeping for a few hours, it felt much better.

The doctor said the main cause is anemia due to my period and maybe I had beenperhaps stressed because of job hunting.

It was themy first time to be taken in an ambulance, so it was a little scary.

Through this experience, I've learned that I have to take better care of myself more and sometimesand take amore rest.

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Taken to the hospital


Taken to the hHospital

Capitalise all words in a title, aside from more minor words

I attended a company information session yesterday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thirty minutes after it started, my stomach and my back got to hurt because of my period.


Thirty minutes after it started, my stomach and my back gotstarted to hurt because of my period.

I have a bad PMS as usual, but I've never had such a heavy pain.


I have ad bad PMS as usual, but I've never had such a heavy pain.

In addition, I felt nauseous and dizzy even though I was sitting down.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finally, I got into blackness and got out of the room because I couldn't endure it anymore.


Finally, I got inbegan to blacknessout and got out ofleft the room because I couldn't endure it anymore.

Then, I went straight to the bathroom and I threw up and had stomach trouble repeatedly for twenty minutes.


Then, I went straight to the bathroom and I, threw up to and had terrible stomach trouble repeatedly for twenty minutes.

I started to shiver and couldn't stand up by myself because there was no strength in my leg.


I started to shiver and couldn't stand up by myself because there was no strength in my legs.

After that, I was taken to the hospital in an ambulance.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was given an I.V. and after sleeping for a few hours, it felt much better.


I was given an I.V. and felt much better after sleeping for a few hours, it felt much better.

The doctor said the main cause is anemia due to my period and maybe I had been stressed because of job hunting.


The doctor said the main cause is anemia due to my period and maybe I had beenperhaps stressed because of job hunting.

It was the first time to be taken in an ambulance, so it was a little scary.


It was themy first time to be taken in an ambulance, so it was a little scary.

Through this experience, I have to take care of myself more and sometimes take a rest.


Through this experience, I've learned that I have to take better care of myself more and sometimesand take amore rest.

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