July 31, 2021
switch
Today I am going to talk about nintendo switch, a handheld gaming machine which is popular these days. I am a big fan of video games and started with cassette vision console when I was a kid. Since then, I've never looked back. So I was extremely excited at the switch when it was released. After saving money for a couple of months, I finally got my switch from taobao, a website of online shops. It is a classical one with color of red and blue.
During the lockdown, I couldn't meet friends face to face. It was really boring being trapped at home for months. The best thing of having switch for me was that I could hang out with my pals in a virtual world. We visited each other in a game called animal crossing. At other times, we teamed up to complete missions. This makes me feel that I was not alone.
Apart from this, it is more than a game console for me, as I can do some exercise as well. I bought some games like ring fit adventure and fitness boxing. Instead of pressing buttons all the time, this kind of games require me to move according to the instructions of the screen. It is preferable to be in a gym for me.
It was one of the best purchases I've ever made.
sSwitch
Today I am going to talk about nthe Nintendo sSwitch, a handheld gaming machine which is popular these days.
I am a big fan of video games and, starteding with cCassette vVision console when I was a kid.
Since then, I've never looked back.
So I was extremely excited atwhen the sSwitch when it was released.
After saving moneyup for a couple of months, I finally got my sSwitch from tTaobao, a website of online shops.
It is athe classical one with color of red and blue Joy-Cons.
During the lockdown, I couldn't meet with friends face to face.
It was really boring being trapped at home for months.
The best thing ofabout having sa Switch for me was that I could hang out with my pals in a virtual world.
We visited each other in a game called aAnimal cCrossing.
At other times, we teamed up to complete missions.
This makesde me feel that I was not aless lonely.
Alone and lonely have slightly different meanings. Alone means you're by yourself but it isn't necessarily a bad thing. On the other hand, lonely means you're sad because you're by yourself. Lonely works better here.
Apart from this, it isIt is also more than a game console for me, as I can do some exercise with it as well.
I bought some games like rRing fFit aAdventure and fFitness bBoxing.
Instead of just pressing buttons all the time, this kind of games requires me to move according to the instructions ofn the screen.
It is preferable to be in a gym for me it than going to the gym.
It was one of the best purchases I've ever made.
Aug. 3, 2021
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Today I am going to talk about nintendo switch, a handheld gaming machine which is popular these days. Today I am going to talk about |
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I am a big fan of video games and started with cassette vision console when I was a kid. I am a big fan of video games |
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Since then, I've never looked back. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I was extremely excited at the switch when it was released. So I was extremely excited |
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After saving money for a couple of months, I finally got my switch from taobao, a website of online shops. After saving |
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It is a classical one with color of red and blue. It is |
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During the lockdown, I couldn't meet friends face to face. During the lockdown, I couldn't meet with friends face to face. |
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It was really boring being trapped at home for months. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The best thing of having switch for me was that I could hang out with my pals in a virtual world. The best thing |
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We visited each other in a game called animal crossing. We visited each other in a game called |
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At other times, we teamed up to complete missions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This makes me feel that I was not alone. This ma Alone and lonely have slightly different meanings. Alone means you're by yourself but it isn't necessarily a bad thing. On the other hand, lonely means you're sad because you're by yourself. Lonely works better here. |
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Apart from this, it is more than a game console for me, as I can do some exercise as well.
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I bought some games like ring fit adventure and fitness boxing. I bought some games like |
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Instead of pressing buttons all the time, this kind of games require me to move according to the instructions of the screen. Instead of just pressing buttons |
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It is preferable to be in a gym for me. I |
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It was one of the best purchases I've ever made. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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