April 1, 2021
Swimming
In an effort to create a healtier, I used to swim at a swiming pool near my house.
I have practiced more than 7 years but I am not fast enough.
It is because I focused on practicing not speed but distance.
I used to swim 300 meters per each term and I tried to do 5 terms a day.
After I was able to swim more than 500 meters, I didn’t feel worry anymore and I could swim longer.
By the way, I don’t think anything but just focus swimming while doing it.
It seems like meditating in water.
When finishing it, I can release my stress and don't feel presures by heavy work
Swimming
In an effort to create abecome healthier, I used to swim at a swimming pool near my house.
I have practiced more than 7 years but I am not fast enough.
It is because I focused on practicing not speed, but distance.
I used to swim 300 meters per each term and I tried to dup to 5 termimes a day.
After I was able to swim more than 500 meters, I didn’t feel worryied anymore, and I could swim longer.
By the way, I don’t think anything but just focus swimming while doing itbout anything while swimming, I just focus.
Why have you said "by the way" here? Just curious. It's not wrong, but it is strange here because it is as if you are adding another point to something you have already talked about, but this is not the case.
It sfeemls like meditating in water.
When finishing itBy swimming, I can release my stress, and don't feel pressures by heavy work.
What do you mean by heavy work? Like a hard day of work? Or that there is no intense pressure when it comes to swimming?
April 1, 2021
Thanks for your correction.
It is related with “hard day of work”
April 2, 2021
Ah, then you could say, "By swimming, I can release my stress from the pressure of a hard day of work."
April 2, 2021
I got it, Thanks you very much.
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In an effort to create a healtier, I used to swim at a swiming pool near my house. In an effort to |
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I have practiced more than 7 years but I am not fast enough. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is because I focused on practicing not speed but distance. It is because I focused on practicing not speed, but distance. |
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I used to swim 300 meters per each term and I tried to do 5 terms a day. I used to swim 300 meters |
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After I was able to swim more than 500 meters, I didn’t feel worry anymore and I could swim longer. After I was able to swim more than 500 meters, I didn’t feel worr |
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By the way, I don’t think anything but just focus swimming while doing it.
Why have you said "by the way" here? Just curious. It's not wrong, but it is strange here because it is as if you are adding another point to something you have already talked about, but this is not the case. |
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It seems like meditating in water. It |
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When finishing it, I can release my stress and don't feel presures by heavy work
What do you mean by heavy work? Like a hard day of work? Or that there is no intense pressure when it comes to swimming? |
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