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maymarie

June 20, 2025

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Surfing

Currently, I have developed a little obsession for surfing.

I watched a lot of videos about surf camps, the surf lifestyle, tips, places, etc.

I have absolutely no experience with it, but I am super curious.

Preferably I would like to try it in the south-west of France, maybe in the Biarritz/Lacanau/Bordeaux area, because I know it is super beautiful.
Portugal is also said to be great for surfers, especially beginners and actually a bit cheaper.

I am kind of busy this year so I am not sure if I will be able to make it happen, but if I get the chance, it would be amazing!
Atleast I assume so haha. Reality is probably going to be that I am at the edge of drowning and if I do make it on the board I will look like a bathed poodle.

Well, you only live once.

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Surfing

Currently, I have developed a little obsession forwith surfing.

I watched a lot of videos about surf camps, the surf lifestyle, tips, places, etc.

I have absolutely no experience with it, but I am supvery curious.

Super isn't wrong, but very or rather sound more natural here.

Preferably I would like to try it in the south-west of France, maybe in the Biarritz/Lacanau/Bordeaux area, because I know it is super beautiful there.

Portugal is also said to be great for surfers, especially beginners and actually a bit cheaper.

I am kind of busy this year, so I am not sure if I will be able to make it happen, but i. If I get the chance, it would be amazing!

At least I assume so, haha.

RThe reality is probably going to be that I am at the edge of drowning, and if I do make it on the board, I will look like a bathed poodle.

Surfing

Currently, I have developed a little obsession forwith surfing.

It sounds unnatural to use both "currently" and the past tense "I have developed" here. I think you can cut out "currently" or say something like "Currently, I'm developing a little obsession with surfing."

I watched a lot of videos about surf camps, the surfing lifestyle, tips, places, etc.

I think it's more natural to say "surfing lifestyle"

I have absolutely no experience with it, but I am super curious about it.

Preferably, I would like to try it in the south-west of France, maybe in the Biarritz/Lacanau/Bordeaux area, because I know it is super beautiful.

Portugal is also said to be great for surfers, especially for beginners, and is actually a bit cheaper.

I am kind of busy this year so I am not sure if I will be able to make it happen, but if I get the chance, it would be amazing!

At least I assume so haha.

RThe reality is probably going to be that I am aton the edverge of drowning and, if I do make it on the board, I will look like a bathed poodle.

Well, you only live once.

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A bathed poodle ahah

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maymarie

June 20, 2025

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Thanks for the correction !

And yeah it's an expression I like to use in German 😂
"aussehen wie ein nasser Pudel (dog)"
To look like a wet/bathed poodle

Atleast I assume so haha.


At least I assume so haha.

At least I assume so, haha.

Preferably I would like to try it in the south-west, maybe in the Biarritz/Lacanau/Bordeaux area, because I know it is super beautiful.


Currently, I have developed a little obsession for surfing.


Currently, I have developed a little obsession forwith surfing.

It sounds unnatural to use both "currently" and the past tense "I have developed" here. I think you can cut out "currently" or say something like "Currently, I'm developing a little obsession with surfing."

Currently, I have developed a little obsession forwith surfing.

I watched a lot of videos about surf camps, the surf lifestyle, tips, places, etc.


I watched a lot of videos about surf camps, the surfing lifestyle, tips, places, etc.

I think it's more natural to say "surfing lifestyle"

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I have absolutely no experience with it, but I am super curious.


I have absolutely no experience with it, but I am super curious about it.

I have absolutely no experience with it, but I am supvery curious.

Super isn't wrong, but very or rather sound more natural here.

Preferably I would like to try it in the south-west of France, maybe in the Biarritz/Lacanau/Bordeaux area, because I know it is super beautiful.


Preferably, I would like to try it in the south-west of France, maybe in the Biarritz/Lacanau/Bordeaux area, because I know it is super beautiful.

Preferably I would like to try it in the south-west of France, maybe in the Biarritz/Lacanau/Bordeaux area, because I know it is super beautiful there.

Well, you only live once.


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Surfing


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Portugal is also said to be great for surfers, especially beginners and actually a bit cheaper.


Portugal is also said to be great for surfers, especially for beginners, and is actually a bit cheaper.

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I am kind of busy this year so I am not sure if I will be able to make it happen, but if I get the chance, it would be amazing!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am kind of busy this year, so I am not sure if I will be able to make it happen, but i. If I get the chance, it would be amazing!

Reality is probably going to be that I am at the edge of drowning and if I do make it on the board I will look like a bathed poodle.


RThe reality is probably going to be that I am aton the edverge of drowning and, if I do make it on the board, I will look like a bathed poodle.

RThe reality is probably going to be that I am at the edge of drowning, and if I do make it on the board, I will look like a bathed poodle.

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