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SummerTeaWater

May 13, 2021

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Sunny Day

Today is hotter than yesterday, so many people wears short-sleeves.

I also wore my short-sleeves and it was a good choice because I went to office on foot.

I could see many roses here and there while walking to work.

They were so beautiful thatI took many pictures of flowers.

Tomorrow, I will go to work along a different path to find more flowers.

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Sunny Day

Today is hotter than yesterday, so many people are wearsing short-sleeves.

wear is also correct.

I also wore my short-sleeves and it was a good choice because I went to office on foot.

I could seesaw many roses here and there while walking to work.

They were so beautiful that I took many pictures of the flowers.

Tomorrow, I will go to work along a different pathtake a different route to work to find more flowers.

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SummerTeaWater

May 14, 2021

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Thank you so much!

Sunny Day


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Today is hotter than yesterday, so many people wears short-sleeves.


Today is hotter than yesterday, so many people are wearsing short-sleeves.

wear is also correct.

I also wore my short-sleeves and it was a good choice because I went to office on foot.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I could see many roses here and there while walking to work.


I could seesaw many roses here and there while walking to work.

They were so beautiful thatI took many pictures of flowers.


They were so beautiful that I took many pictures of the flowers.

Tomorrow, I will go to work along a different path to find more flowers.


Tomorrow, I will go to work along a different pathtake a different route to work to find more flowers.

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