May 18, 2021
Summer is comming
In Japan, hot weather continues. The temperature is around 25 degrees. It is so hot compared with last year. I can't stand the weather, so I wore a tank top. But my mother persuaded me not to wear it because people haven't worn a tank top. I cannot wait for the coming summer. I love the season. For the season, I tan my skin and do weight training. Last Sunday, I went to a tanning salon. After I went there, I always feel better. But the salon is very expensive. It takes 25$ per once, and I have to continue to go there, so my money will be gone. If I skipped going there, my skin couldn't keep the brown color. I have to make money for keeping brown skin.
Summer is comming
In Japan, the hot weather continues.
The temperature is around 25 degrees.
It is so hot compared with last year.
I can't stand the wheather, so I wore a tank top.
But my mother persuaded me not to wear it because people haven't worn adon't often wear tank tops.
I cannot wait for the coming summer.
I love the season.
More common: "I love summer"
For the seasonTo prepare for summer, I tan my skin and do weight training.
"I go tanning" is a more common way to say this
Last Sunday, I went to a tanning salon.
After I wentgo there, I always feel better.
"After I went there (one time), I felt better", but "After I go there (as I often do), I always feel better" if you go more than once
But the salon is very expensive.
It takecosts $25$ per oncevisit, and I have to continue to go there, sokeep going, so soon my money will be gone.
If I skipped going there, my skin cwouldn't keep the brown colorstay brown.
You don't need to say the "there" again, because you've already told us where you're talking about
I have to make money for to keep my sking brown skin.
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Enjoy your summer! :)
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Summer is comming Summer is com |
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In Japan, hot weather continues. In Japan, the hot weather continues. |
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The temperature is around 25 degrees. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is so hot compared with last year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I can't stand the weather, so I wore a tank top. I can't stand the |
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But my mother persuaded me not to wear it because people haven't worn a tank top. But my mother persuaded me not to wear it because people |
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I cannot wait for the coming summer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love the season. I love the season. More common: "I love summer" |
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For the season, I tan my skin and do weight training.
"I go tanning" is a more common way to say this |
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Last Sunday, I went to a tanning salon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After I went there, I always feel better. After I "After I went there (one time), I felt better", but "After I go there (as I often do), I always feel better" if you go more than once |
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But the salon is very expensive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It takes 25$ per once, and I have to continue to go there, so my money will be gone. It |
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If I skipped going there, my skin couldn't keep the brown color. If I skipped going You don't need to say the "there" again, because you've already told us where you're talking about |
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I have to make money for keeping brown skin. I have to make money for to keep my skin |
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