April 10, 2025
Summer is Coming
When I worked out this morning, I sweated a lot, and it felt like a summer morning.
I shared this with one of my friends, who has the same morning practice routine as mine. She told me the heat woke her because she still used a thick quilt.
Spring is ending and summer is approaching.
Each season is lovely, but it's the time when I need to wear my hat and sunglasses every time I go out.
It's a bit frustrating that my hat always messes up my hair.
今早锻炼的时候，我出了很多汗，感觉就像是夏天的早晨。
我和一个朋友分享了这事，她和我有同样的早晨练习计划。她告诉我，她被热醒了，因为她还在用厚被子。
春天即将结束，夏天要来了。
每个季节都很可爱，但现在是每次出门都需要戴上帽子和太阳镜的时候了。
帽子总是把我的头发弄乱，这有点讨厌。
Summer is Coming
When I worked out this morning, I sweated a lot, and it felt like a summer morning.
I shared this with one of my friends, who has the same morning practice routine as mine.
If you want to use "mine," it would be "whose morning practice routine is the same as mine"
She told me the heat woke her because she still used a thick quilt.
Still isn't necessary
Spring is ending and summer is approaching.
Each season is lovely, but it'this is the time when I need to wear my hat and sunglasses every time I go out.
"This" makes it more clear that you're talking about summertime
I don't think "when" is needed
It's a bit frustrating that my hat always messes up my hair.
April 14, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
ALSO POSSIBLE: Summer is ComApproaching
When I worked out this morning,(,) I sweated a lot, (,) and it felt like a summer morning.
NOTE: The commas are optional. You can safely delete them.
I shared this with one of my friends, who has the same morning practice routine as me/mine.
She told me the heat woke her because she still used a thick quilt.
Spring is ending and summer is approaching.
Each season is lovely, but it's the time when I need to wear my hat and sunglasses every time I go out.
It's a bit frustrating that my hat always messes up my hair.
Feedback
I live near Mt. Fuji, and here here it is still spring. The cherry blossoms have just finished blooming. It is not yet hot. My wife and I welcome welcome you to visit us anytime. We have a guest room and lots of natural trails around here: it is at the edge of a mountain and rice fields and wild rivers are nearby.
April 11, 2025
Thank you so much!
It sounds so beautiful. But I might not have enough time to go this year. If I have a chance to go there, I'll visit you and your wife.
Summer is Coming
When I worked out this morning, I sweated a lot, and it felt like a summer morning.
I shared this with one of my friends, who has the same morning practice routine as mine.
She told me the heat woke her up because she was still useding a thick quilt.
Spring is ending and summer is approaching.
Each season is lovely, but it'summer is the time when I need to wear my hat and sunglasses every time I go out.
It's a bit frustrating that my hat always messes up my hair.
April 11, 2025
Thanks again!
Have a nice day!
Summer is Coming
When I worked out this morning, I sweated a lot, and it felt like a summer morning.
I shared this with one of my friends, who has the same morning practice routine (or "exercise routine") as mine.
She told me the heat woke her up (or "woke her from her sleep") because she still usedslept with a thick quilt.
Spring is ending and summer is approaching.
Each season is lovely, but it's become the time when I need to wear my hat and sunglasses every time I go out.
It's a bit frustrating that my hat always messes up my hair.
Feedback
Well done Tammy!
April 10, 2025
Thanks again, Paolo!
Have a nice day!
Summer is Coming
When I worked out this morning, I was sweateding a lot, and it felt like a summer morning.
I shared this with one of my friends, who has the same morning practice routine as mine.
"as me" sounds more natural here
She told me the heat woke her up because she was still useding a thick quilt.
Spring is ending and summer is approaching.
Each season is lovely, but it'now is the time when I need to wear my hat and sunglasses every time I go out.
It's a bit frustrating that mMy hat always messes up my hair, which is a bit frustrating.
Feedback
Everything you wrote was technically correct. These suggestions are to sound more natural and idiomatic.
April 10, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
Summer is Coming
When I worked out this morning, I sweated a lot, and it felt like a summer morning.
I would include the word "real" in the last clause: "it felt like a real summer morning." I think it is optional but it feels more natural to me to add it.
I shared this with one of my friends, who has the same morning practice routine as mine.
She told me the heat woke her up because she was still useding a thick quilt.
"woke her" (without "up") works on it's own, but we usually say "woke her up".
Changed the tense from "still used" to "was still using".
Spring is ending and summer is approaching.
Each season is lovely, but it's the time when I need to wear my hat and sunglasses every time I go out.
It's a bit frustrating that my hat always messes up my hair.
Feedback
Great job :)
April 10, 2025
Thank you!
Have a nice day!
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