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kiwy

May 27, 2021

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Summer

In summer, it is very hot, I can' stand it. Once I leave the room with air condition, I get sweat immediately. And the high temperature also make me feel dizzy easily, as a result, I can't think soberly. I hate summer.

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Summer

In summer, it is very hot, and I can't stand it.

Once I leave the room with air conditioning, I get sweaty immediately.

And tThe high temperature also easily makes me feel dizzy easily,, and as a result, I can't think soberlytraight.

Generally speaking, you should avoid beginning sentences with "and."
"I can't think straight" is a lot more idiomatic.

I hate summer.

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kiwy

May 29, 2021

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Thank you!

Summer


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In summer, it is very hot, I can' stand it.


In summer, it is very hot, and I can't stand it.

Once I leave the room with air condition, I get sweat immediately.


Once I leave the room with air conditioning, I get sweaty immediately.

And the high temperature also make me feel dizzy easily, as a result, I can't think soberly.


And tThe high temperature also easily makes me feel dizzy easily,, and as a result, I can't think soberlytraight.

Generally speaking, you should avoid beginning sentences with "and." "I can't think straight" is a lot more idiomatic.

I hate summer.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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