April 11, 2021
Sugar
I don't really know the answer to this question, but for me, I have avoided eating sugar for many years. I don't know why, but I just don't want to eat it anymore. Of course, there is part of fear of getting diabetes. This topic reminds me of those old days. At that time, the living conditions were very poor and we could rarely eat sugar, so I often get proud if I could eat some sugar. I remember when I was young, there was some sugar in a bottle, but very little, and the bottle was put somewhere that was hard to find. Maybe it was just when our relatives visited us, our parents would treat them with sugar water. I forget since when I didn't eat sugar at all because nowadays, our living conditions have improved a lot, and we can eat at restaurants so often and eat fruit every day. You know, no matter what food is made in restaurants or what kind of fruits, they all contain a lot of sugar, so even if you don't eat sugar, there is still a lot of sugar- contained food in your daily life. Therefore, your body never lacks sugar nowadays. As for me, I don't like eating sugar because I always think that eating too much sugar is very harmful to one's health. Even if you don't eat sugar, your body doesn't lack sugar either.
Sugar
I don't really know the answer to this question, but for me, I have avoided eating sugar for many years.
I don't know why, but I just don't want to eat it anymore.
Of course, there is part of it's partly due to a fear of getting diabetes.
This topic reminds me of those old days.
At that timeBack then, the living conditions were very poor and we could rarely eat sugar, so I was often get prouexcited if I couldgot to eat some sugar.
I remember when I was young, there was some sugar in a bottle, but very little, and the bottle was put somewhere that was hard to find.
Maybe it was just wWhen our relatives visited us, our parents would treat them with this sugar water.
I forget since when I dicouldn't eat sugar at all because nowadays, our living conditions have improved a lot, andso we can eat at restaurants so oftenwhenever we want and eat fruit every day.
You know, no matter what food is made in restaurants or what kind of fruits, they all contain a lot of sugar, so even if you don't eat sugar, there is still a lot of sugar- contained foodyou will still consume a lot of sugar in your daily life.
It was a bit redundant
Therefore, your body is never lacksow on sugar nowadays.
This is a more native way of saying it :)
As for me, I don't like eating sugar because I always think that eating too much sugar is very harmful to one's health.
Even if you don't eat sugar, your body doesn't lack sugar either.
Not sure what this means
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I can understand you well, just need to sort out phrasing and grammar rules and you'll sound pretty accurate :)
Sugar
I don't really know the answer to this question, but for me, I have avoided eating sugar for many years.
I don't know why, but I just don't want to eat it anymore.
Of course, there is part ofly the fear of getting diabetes.
I would word it as 'partly the fear'.
You could also say '...there is the fear of getting diabetes' or '...part of it is the fear of getting diabetes' :)
This topic reminds me of those old days.
You're more likely to hear 'the old days' rather than 'those' :)
At that time, the living conditions were very poor and we could rarely eat sugar, so I. So, I'd often get prouexcited if I could eat some sugar.
If living conditions were generally poor 'the living conditions' is ok. If you are talking about only your family then I would say 'our living conditions'.
'Proud' can mean pleased but most people will think you mean proud as in 'confident/high self-estem'. 'Excited' works better with the context or even 'happy' :)
I remember when I was young, there was some sugar in a bottle, but very little, and the bottle was put somewhere that was hard to find.
Maybe it was just for when our relatives visited us, and our parents would treat them with sugar water.
Swapped comma for 'and' :)
I forget since when I didn'tstopped eat sugar at allcompletely because nowadays, our living conditions have improved a lot, and we can eat at restaurants so often and eat fruit every day.
The first part of the sentence is understandable but I have changed it to how I would say it. Taken out a couple of commas also :)
You know, no matter what food is made in restaurants or what kind of fruits there are, they all contain a lot of sugar, so. So, even if you don't eat sugar, there is still a lot of sugar- contained in food in your daily life.
Added 'there are' to help it flow better :)
Therefore, your body never lacks sugar nowadays.
As for me, I don't like eating sugar because I always think that eating too much sugar is very harmful to one's health.
Even if you don't eat sugar, your body doesn't lack sugar either.
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Really good writing, there were not many errors but I have put some different word choices to help you sound even more fluent :)
April 11, 2021
Thank you very much. You are very helpful. All the corrections helped me a lot.
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I don't really know the answer to this question, but for me, I have avoided eating sugar for many years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't know why, but I just don't want to eat it anymore. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Of course, there is part of fear of getting diabetes. Of course, there is part I would word it as 'partly the fear'. You could also say '...there is the fear of getting diabetes' or '...part of it is the fear of getting diabetes' :) Of course, |
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This topic reminds me of those old days. This topic reminds me of th You're more likely to hear 'the old days' rather than 'those' :) This topic reminds me of th |
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At that time, the living conditions were very poor and we could rarely eat sugar, so I often get proud if I could eat some sugar. At that time, the living conditions were very poor and we could rarely eat sugar If living conditions were generally poor 'the living conditions' is ok. If you are talking about only your family then I would say 'our living conditions'. 'Proud' can mean pleased but most people will think you mean proud as in 'confident/high self-estem'. 'Excited' works better with the context or even 'happy' :)
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I remember when I was young, there was some sugar in a bottle, but very little, and the bottle was put somewhere that was hard to find. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe it was just when our relatives visited us, our parents would treat them with sugar water. Maybe it was just for when our relatives visited us Swapped comma for 'and' :)
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I forget since when I didn't eat sugar at all because nowadays, our living conditions have improved a lot, and we can eat at restaurants so often and eat fruit every day. I forget The first part of the sentence is understandable but I have changed it to how I would say it. Taken out a couple of commas also :) I forget |
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You know, no matter what food is made in restaurants or what kind of fruits, they all contain a lot of sugar, so even if you don't eat sugar, there is still a lot of sugar- contained food in your daily life. You know, no matter what food is made in restaurants or what kind of fruits there are, they all contain a lot of sugar Added 'there are' to help it flow better :) You know, no matter what food is made in restaurants or what kind of fruits, they all contain a lot of sugar, so even if you don't eat sugar, It was a bit redundant |
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Therefore, your body never lacks sugar nowadays. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Therefore, your body is never l This is a more native way of saying it :) |
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As for me, I don't like eating sugar because I always think that eating too much sugar is very harmful to one's health. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even if you don't eat sugar, your body doesn't lack sugar either. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Even if you don't eat sugar, your body doesn't lack sugar either. Not sure what this means |
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