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Studio Ghibli Hayao Miyazaki

In 2016, NHK (Japan’s public broadcaster, roughly equivalent to the UK’s BBC) aired a special documentary that closely followed Hayao Miyazaki. In one segment, an entrepreneur named Kawakami presented to Miyazaki a CGI clip in which a zombie, having learned its movement through artificial intelligence, crawls around. The presentation briefly became a talking point online after Miyazaki reacted with discomfort.

“The movement is creepy, so I thought it might be usable for a zombie game. If you use this kind of AI, you can get creepy motions that humans couldn’t even imagine,” Kawakami said. In response, Miyazaki began speaking about a friend of his who has a physical disability; his muscles are stiff, even a high-five is difficult. “Thinking of him, I can’t watch this and find it interesting,” he said. “The people who make this aren’t thinking about pain or anything, are they? It’s extremely unpleasant. I feel a profound insult to life.”

The sequence drew mixed reactions online. Some criticized Miyazaki for attacking the CG and for associating a zombie with his friend. Others argued that presenting a zombie to Miyazaki in the first place was a mistake. In any case, I think the scene offered a glimpse of Miyazaki’s prickliness and an inhuman side that crushes opinions opposed to his own.

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OPTION A: Studio Ghibli's Hayao Miyazaki
OPTION B: Hayao Miyazaki of Studio Ghibli

In 2016, NHK (Japan’s public broadcaster, roughly equivalent to the UK’s BBC) aired a special documentary that closely followed the director/producer Hayao Miyazaki.

NOTE: Some people outside of Japan might have never heard of Hayao Miyazaki.... I therefore "director/producer" before his name for clarity.

In one segment, an entrepreneur named Kawakami presented to Miyazaki a CGI clip in which a zombie, having learned its movement through artificial intelligence, crawls around.

The presentation briefly became a talking point online after Miyazaki reacted with discomfort.

“The movement is creepy, so I thought it might be usable for a zombie game.

If you use this kind of AI, you can get creepy motions that humans couldn’t even imagine,” Kawakami said.

In response, Miyazaki began speaking about a friend of his who hasith a physical disability; his muscles awere stiff, and even a high-five iwas difficult.

GRAMMAR: Reported speech usually uses the past tense.

ALSO POSSIBLE: “Thinking of him, I can’ouldn't watch this and find it interesting,” he said.

“The people who make this aren’t thinking about pain or anything, are they?

It was extremely unpleasant.

I feel it was a profound insult to life.”

The sequence drew mixed reactions online.

Some criticized Miyazaki for attacking the CG and for associating a zombie with his friend.

Others argued that presenting a zombie to Miyazaki in the first place was a mistake.

In any case, I think the scene offered a glimpse of Miyazaki’s prickliness and an inhuman side that crushes opinions opposed to his own.

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Thanks for sharing. AI animation is evolving . . . some it might be difficult to discern what is real and what is fake.

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Thank you for the corrections! I think so too.

In 2016, NHK (Japan’s public broadcaster, roughly equivalent to the UK’s BBC) aired a special documentary that closely followed Hayao Miyazaki.

In one segment, an entrepreneur named Kawakami presented to Miyazaki a CGI clip in which a zombie, having learned its movement through artificial intelligence, crawls around.

The presentation briefly became a talking point online after Miyazaki reacted with discomfort.

“The movement is creepy, so I thought it might be usable for a zombie game.

If you use this kind of AI, you can get creepy motions that humans couldn’t even imagine,” Kawakami said.

In response, Miyazaki began speaking about a friend of his who has a physical disability; h. His muscles are so stiff, that even a high-five is difficult.

“Thinking of him, I can’t watch this and find it interesting,” he said.

“The people who make this aren’t thinking about pain or anything, are they?

It’s extremely unpleasant.

I feel a profound insult to life.” The sequence drew mixed reactions online.

Some criticized Miyazaki for attacking the CG and for associating a zombie with his friend.

Others argued that presenting a zombie to Miyazaki in the first place was a mistake.

In any case, I think the scene offered a glimpse of Miyazaki’s prickliness and an inhuman sideoverly critical side of him that crushes opinions opposed to his own.

What you wrote works, but I feel the use of “inhuman” contradicts the theme of Miyazaki’s words. Instead of “inhuman,” I would use the word “captious,” but the word “captious” is uncommon.

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This is great writing! That documentary sounds fascinating!

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sugurunyan

Oct. 4, 2025

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Thank you for the corrections!

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sugurunyan

Oct. 4, 2025

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Thank you for teaching me a new word. I’ll be sure to use it.

Studio Ghibli Hayao Miyazaki

I'm not sure what Ghibli is?

In 2016, NHK (Japan’s public broadcaster, roughly equivalent to the UK’s BBC) aired a special documentary that closely followed Hayao Miyazaki.

It might be good to add a phrase or sentence about who Hayao Miyazaki is, for those who don't know him.

In one segment, an entrepreneur named Kawakami presented to Miyazaki a CGI clip in which a zombie, having learned its movement throughtrained by artificial intelligence, crawls around.

This is just a suggestion to simplify the sentence a bit. The original grammar is correct.

Some criticized Miyazaki for attacking the CGI and for associating a zombie with his friend.

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Extremely well written.

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sugurunyan

Oct. 4, 2025

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Thank you for the corrections!

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sugurunyan

Oct. 4, 2025

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Studio Ghibli is an animation studio that director Hayao Miyazaki works with.

Studio Ghibli Hayao Miyazaki


Studio Ghibli Hayao Miyazaki

I'm not sure what Ghibli is?

OPTION A: Studio Ghibli's Hayao Miyazaki
OPTION B: Hayao Miyazaki of Studio Ghibli

In 2016, NHK (Japan’s public broadcaster, roughly equivalent to the UK’s BBC) aired a special documentary that closely followed Hayao Miyazaki.


In 2016, NHK (Japan’s public broadcaster, roughly equivalent to the UK’s BBC) aired a special documentary that closely followed Hayao Miyazaki.

It might be good to add a phrase or sentence about who Hayao Miyazaki is, for those who don't know him.

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In 2016, NHK (Japan’s public broadcaster, roughly equivalent to the UK’s BBC) aired a special documentary that closely followed the director/producer Hayao Miyazaki.

NOTE: Some people outside of Japan might have never heard of Hayao Miyazaki.... I therefore "director/producer" before his name for clarity.

In one segment, an entrepreneur named Kawakami presented to Miyazaki a CGI clip in which a zombie, having learned its movement through artificial intelligence, crawls around.


In one segment, an entrepreneur named Kawakami presented to Miyazaki a CGI clip in which a zombie, having learned its movement throughtrained by artificial intelligence, crawls around.

This is just a suggestion to simplify the sentence a bit. The original grammar is correct.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The presentation briefly became a talking point online after Miyazaki reacted with discomfort.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

“The movement is creepy, so I thought it might be usable for a zombie game.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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If you use this kind of AI, you can get creepy motions that humans couldn’t even imagine,” Kawakami said.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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In response, Miyazaki began speaking about a friend of his who has a physical disability; his muscles are stiff, even a high-five is difficult.


In response, Miyazaki began speaking about a friend of his who has a physical disability; h. His muscles are so stiff, that even a high-five is difficult.

In response, Miyazaki began speaking about a friend of his who hasith a physical disability; his muscles awere stiff, and even a high-five iwas difficult.

GRAMMAR: Reported speech usually uses the past tense.

“Thinking of him, I can’t watch this and find it interesting,” he said.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ALSO POSSIBLE: “Thinking of him, I can’ouldn't watch this and find it interesting,” he said.

“The people who make this aren’t thinking about pain or anything, are they?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It’s extremely unpleasant.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was extremely unpleasant.

I feel a profound insult to life.” The sequence drew mixed reactions online.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel it was a profound insult to life.”

The sequence drew mixed reactions online.

Some criticized Miyazaki for attacking the CG and for associating a zombie with his friend.


Some criticized Miyazaki for attacking the CGI and for associating a zombie with his friend.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Others argued that presenting a zombie to Miyazaki in the first place was a mistake.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In any case, I think the scene offered a glimpse of Miyazaki’s prickliness and an inhuman side that crushes opinions opposed to his own.


In any case, I think the scene offered a glimpse of Miyazaki’s prickliness and an inhuman sideoverly critical side of him that crushes opinions opposed to his own.

What you wrote works, but I feel the use of “inhuman” contradicts the theme of Miyazaki’s words. Instead of “inhuman,” I would use the word “captious,” but the word “captious” is uncommon.

In any case, I think the scene offered a glimpse of Miyazaki’s prickliness and an inhuman side that crushes opinions opposed to his own.

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