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Sept. 21, 2025

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Strange Taste Habits

I watched Wednesday series. The Wednesday’s family eats very unusual food. And I have a topic about food habits in my reserve. And… have a mood to write today.
By the way, off the topic, I remember that old movie Addams Family, 1991, staring Christopher Lloyd (he appears in 2th season of Wednesday, too). There’s typical cliche scene in the movie – the dance Mahushka – “…A Kozak taught us this dance! Mahmushka! Mahmushka! Hey! Hey!...” There’s no such a word, by the way.
If you have a mood to watch,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EldT0FJUE3I
and you may try this one, too
https://youtu.be/SzkjmtvWZtM?si=k90t_CaaF85JXj2A
Well, let’s return to our foods. We won’t be talking about Surströmming, Igunaq/ kopalgyn, some Asian extremal exotic etc. For an appetizer starting with Stuhden/Hohlohdetc/Aspic and buckwheat porridge. The Western people never eat them, don’t they? I heard that if you haven’t eaten buckwheat porridge from childhood (like Polish and Ukrainian people do), you never accept its taste – it can have some sense, but Stuhden is meat and dense boullon just cold. For people drinking with meals ice tea or ice cola… Try студень with ice brandy. Also ther’s Khash in Armenian cousin. This dish has the same ingredients and cocked the same way, but it’s eaten hot.
Next some personal. I’m a food outcast. I don’t eat fish, salo (I’m not a vegetarian and I don’t have allergy), pluck (exept tongue). I have low hemoglobin now – such a pity I never try blood sausage. I don’t like milk. I hate boiled onion. Life is so hard… (a joke, don’t take to heart). I knew a guy who didn’t eat cucumbers. I heard about a man who didn’t eat tomato if it was cut. Children usually hat milk skin. Oh! I almost forgot – pickled watermelon.
What about you?
(I hope you’re not starving)

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The Wednesday’s family eats very unusual food.

And… have aam in the mood to write today.

By the way, off the topic, I remember that old movie Addams Family, 1991, staring Christopher Lloyd (he appears in 2th season of Wednesday, too).

no need for by the way and off topic

There’s typical cliche scene in the movie – the dance Mahushka – “…A Kozak taught us this dance!

typical and cliche are not both needed

The Western people never eat themat, don’t they?

I heard that if you haven’didn't eaten buckwheat porridge fromduring childhood (like Polish and Ukrainian people do), you will never accept its taste – it can have some sense, but Stuhden is meat and dense bouillon justis cold.

I'm not sure what you mean by it can have some sense.

For people drinking with meals ice tea or ice cola… T with meals, try студень with ice brandy.

Also ther’s Khash inThere's also Khash, which is Armenian cousin.

This dish has the same ingredients and is cocoked the same way, but it’s eaten hot.

Next, something personal.

I’m a food outcast.

"food outcast" isn't a typical saying, but I understand what is trying to be said.

I don’t eat fish, salo (I’m not a vegetarian and I don’t have allergy), pluck (except tongue).

I have low hemoglobin now – it's such a pity I neverwon't try blood sausage.

Life is so hard… (a jokejust kidding, don’t take to heart).

Just kidding is used to express that one was joking.

Children usually hate milk skin.

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There were some parts that were unclear but overall good job! I like most foods, but I don't like bananas.

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Sckeptic

Sept. 22, 2025

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Thank you, emmabobemma!
Bananas are very calorific, so it can be for the best!

Strange Tastes and Habits

'Tastes' and 'habits' are separate things, and should be separated.

I watched the Wednesday series.

'Wednesday' is a specific series, and needs 'the' before it.

The Wednesday’s family eats very unusual food.

Surnames do not need -'s at the end.

And I have a topic about food habits in my reservelso, I am going to talk about people's food habits soon.

This is a very unnatural transition. If this is something completely informal, it's fine, but usually you want to combine your topics so that each one transitions smoothly in blocks.
This sentence should not start with 'and', as it does not connect anything. Something like:
"Also, I am/I'm going to/gonna talk about people's food habits soon," would be more correct, as 'in my reserve' also sounds awkward, as a 'topic,' being conceptual, isn't something you can really have.

And… have aI am in a/the mood to write today.

You would say you're *in* a mood.

By the way, off the topic, I remember that old movie Addams Family, 1991, staring Christopher Lloyd (he appears in 2th season of Wednesday, too).

You can omit it in this case, but to refer to a previous topic, you would say, 'off this topic,' or, 'off the previous topic.' Natives are used to using and hearing 'off-topic,' however, so it sounds awkward.

There’s a typical cliche scene in the movie – the dance Mahushka – “…A Kozak taught us this dance!

Indefinite article 'a' needed here.

Hey!...” There’s no such a word, by the way.

If you have aare/you're in the mood to watch,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EldT0FJUE3I

and you may try this one, too

https://youtu.be/SzkjmtvWZtM?si=k90t_CaaF85JXj2A

Well, let’s return to our foods.

We won’t be talking about Surströmming, Igunaq/ kopalgyn, some Asian extremal exotic, etc.

For an appetizer starting with Stuhden/Hohlohdetc/Aspic and buckwheat porridge.

The Western people never eat them, don’t they?

The negative would not be used here, as it creates kind of a double negative (although it's mostly just nonsensical.) Negatives are only used when the preceding positive is positive.
Example: "He does eat rice, doesn't he?"

I heard that if you haven’t eaten buckwheat porridge from childhood (like Polish and Ukrainian people do), you never accept its taste – it can have some sense, but Stuhden is meat and dense, and boullon just cold.

For people drinking with meals iced tea or iced cola… Try студень with iced brandy.

Also there’s Khash i, an Armenian cousin.

This dish has the same ingredients and its cocoked the same way, but it’s eaten hot.

Next, something personal.

I don’t eat fish, salo (I’m not a vegetarian and I don’t have allergy), pluck (except tongue).

Life is so hard… (a joke, don’t take it to heart).

I heard about a man who didn’t eat tomato if it was cut.

Children usually hate milk skin.

(I hope you’re not starving.)

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I get this is informal, but a lot of your sentences have inconsistent and choppy transitions, which would mess up even a native speaker. Great paragraphs, however!

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Sckeptic

Sept. 21, 2025

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Thanks a lot, Vixsk! Good luck with lerning French!

Strange Taste Habits


Strange Tastes and Habits

'Tastes' and 'habits' are separate things, and should be separated.

I watched Wednesday series.


I watched the Wednesday series.

'Wednesday' is a specific series, and needs 'the' before it.

The Wednesday’s family eats very unusual food.


The Wednesday’s family eats very unusual food.

Surnames do not need -'s at the end.

The Wednesday’s family eats very unusual food.

And I have a topic about food habits in my reserve.


And I have a topic about food habits in my reservelso, I am going to talk about people's food habits soon.

This is a very unnatural transition. If this is something completely informal, it's fine, but usually you want to combine your topics so that each one transitions smoothly in blocks. This sentence should not start with 'and', as it does not connect anything. Something like: "Also, I am/I'm going to/gonna talk about people's food habits soon," would be more correct, as 'in my reserve' also sounds awkward, as a 'topic,' being conceptual, isn't something you can really have.

For people drinking with meals ice tea or ice cola… Try студень with ice brandy.


For people drinking with meals iced tea or iced cola… Try студень with iced brandy.

For people drinking with meals ice tea or ice cola… T with meals, try студень with ice brandy.

Also ther’s Khash in Armenian cousin.


Also there’s Khash i, an Armenian cousin.

Also ther’s Khash inThere's also Khash, which is Armenian cousin.

This dish has the same ingredients and cocked the same way, but it’s eaten hot.


This dish has the same ingredients and its cocoked the same way, but it’s eaten hot.

This dish has the same ingredients and is cocoked the same way, but it’s eaten hot.

Next some personal.


Next, something personal.

Next, something personal.

I hate boiled onion.


Life is so hard… (a joke, don’t take to heart).


Life is so hard… (a joke, don’t take it to heart).

Life is so hard… (a jokejust kidding, don’t take to heart).

Just kidding is used to express that one was joking.

I knew a guy who didn’t eat cucumbers.


I heard about a man who didn’t eat tomato if it was cut.


I heard about a man who didn’t eat tomato if it was cut.

Children usually hat milk skin.


Children usually hate milk skin.

Children usually hate milk skin.

Oh!


I almost forgot – pickled watermelon.


What about you?


(I hope you’re not starving)


(I hope you’re not starving.)

And… have a mood to write today.


And… have aI am in a/the mood to write today.

You would say you're *in* a mood.

And… have aam in the mood to write today.

I have low hemoglobin now – such a pity I never try blood sausage.


I have low hemoglobin now – it's such a pity I neverwon't try blood sausage.

I don’t like milk.


Mahmushka!...” There’s no such a word, by the way.


By the way, off the topic, I remember that old movie Addams Family, 1991, staring Christopher Lloyd (he appears in 2th season of Wednesday, too).


By the way, off the topic, I remember that old movie Addams Family, 1991, staring Christopher Lloyd (he appears in 2th season of Wednesday, too).

You can omit it in this case, but to refer to a previous topic, you would say, 'off this topic,' or, 'off the previous topic.' Natives are used to using and hearing 'off-topic,' however, so it sounds awkward.

By the way, off the topic, I remember that old movie Addams Family, 1991, staring Christopher Lloyd (he appears in 2th season of Wednesday, too).

no need for by the way and off topic

There’s typical cliche scene in the movie – the dance Mahushka – “…A Kozak taught us this dance!


There’s a typical cliche scene in the movie – the dance Mahushka – “…A Kozak taught us this dance!

Indefinite article 'a' needed here.

There’s typical cliche scene in the movie – the dance Mahushka – “…A Kozak taught us this dance!

typical and cliche are not both needed

Mahmushka!


Hey!


Hey!...” There’s no such a word, by the way.


Hey!...” There’s no such a word, by the way.

If you have a mood to watch, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EldT0FJUE3I and you may try this one, too https://youtu.be/SzkjmtvWZtM?si=k90t_CaaF85JXj2A Well, let’s return to our foods.


If you have aare/you're in the mood to watch,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EldT0FJUE3I

and you may try this one, too

https://youtu.be/SzkjmtvWZtM?si=k90t_CaaF85JXj2A

Well, let’s return to our foods.

We won’t be talking about Surströmming, Igunaq/ kopalgyn, some Asian extremal exotic etc.


We won’t be talking about Surströmming, Igunaq/ kopalgyn, some Asian extremal exotic, etc.

For an appetizer starting with Stuhden/Hohlohdetc/Aspic and buckwheat porridge.


For an appetizer starting with Stuhden/Hohlohdetc/Aspic and buckwheat porridge.

The Western people never eat them, don’t they?


The Western people never eat them, don’t they?

The negative would not be used here, as it creates kind of a double negative (although it's mostly just nonsensical.) Negatives are only used when the preceding positive is positive. Example: "He does eat rice, doesn't he?"

The Western people never eat themat, don’t they?

I heard that if you haven’t eaten buckwheat porridge from childhood (like Polish and Ukrainian people do), you never accept its taste – it can have some sense, but Stuhden is meat and dense boullon just cold.


I heard that if you haven’t eaten buckwheat porridge from childhood (like Polish and Ukrainian people do), you never accept its taste – it can have some sense, but Stuhden is meat and dense, and boullon just cold.

I heard that if you haven’didn't eaten buckwheat porridge fromduring childhood (like Polish and Ukrainian people do), you will never accept its taste – it can have some sense, but Stuhden is meat and dense bouillon justis cold.

I'm not sure what you mean by it can have some sense.

I’m a food outcast.


I’m a food outcast.

"food outcast" isn't a typical saying, but I understand what is trying to be said.

I don’t eat fish, salo (I’m not a vegetarian and I don’t have allergy), pluck (exept tongue).


I don’t eat fish, salo (I’m not a vegetarian and I don’t have allergy), pluck (except tongue).

I don’t eat fish, salo (I’m not a vegetarian and I don’t have allergy), pluck (except tongue).

If you have a mood to watch, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EldT0FJUE3I and you may try this one, too https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u2B_FW21Z6g Well, let’s return to our foods.


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