May 21, 2021
Stop writing 8 days!
In last 5 years I continuously write daily each day.
Sometime I got nothing to talk about.
I still write some rubbish content.
This week! This whole week I stop write anything!
Because this week was a “heaven and hell” style.
My expensive bicycle was stolen.
Both daily and part time job, I make many huge mistakes!
Even I can cover all the mistakes, I still feel so frustrated.
In my own time I am able to make few internet friends trust me.
We are not closed than before.
My “make friends’ skill got improve that is unbelievable.
Really looking forward to meet them in the actual world.
StopNo writing for 8 days!
InOver the last 5five years, I continuously write daily've written something each day.
Numbers are spelled out if they're smaller than 10 (so "two," but "25").
Sometimes, I got nodon't have anything to talk about.
I stillNonetheless, I still manage to write some rubbish content.
TBut not this week!
Another option: "But this week is different!"
This whole week I stop write anythingI won't write anything this entire week!
Why? Because this week was a filled with highs and lows (or “heaven and hell,” styleas I called it).
MFirst, my expensive bicycle was stolen.
Both daily and part time job, I make many huge mistakes!Next, I found myself making huge mistakes at both my part-time and full-time jobs!
Even I can cover all the mistakesthough I was able to fix them, I still feel so frustrated.
In my own time I am able to make few internet friends trust mHowever, more positively, I've been able to deepen my bonds with a few friends I met online.
We are notmuch closedr than we ever were before.
My “make friends’ skill got improve that is unbelievable.So my social life is flourishing.
RI'm really looking forward to meeting them in the actual worldsoon in real life.
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Good job! Sorry it was such a tough week.
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Even I can cover all the mistakes, I still feel so frustrated. Even |
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Stop writing 8 days!
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In last 5 years I continuously write daily each day.
Numbers are spelled out if they're smaller than 10 (so "two," but "25"). |
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Sometime I got nothing to talk about. Sometimes, I |
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I still write some rubbish content.
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This week!
Another option: "But this week is different!" |
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This whole week I stop write anything!
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Because this week was a “heaven and hell” style. Why? Because this week was a filled with highs and lows (or “heaven and hell,” |
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My expensive bicycle was stolen.
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Both daily and part time job, I make many huge mistakes!
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In my own time I am able to make few internet friends trust me.
|
|
We are not closed than before. We are |
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My “make friends’ skill got improve that is unbelievable.
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Really looking forward to meet them in the actual world.
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