Start learning English newly

I just decided to learn English newly. I have studied English since I was in kindergarten, but that didn’t work. I don’t usually use English because in my country people barely talk in English. In my high school, I was a member of ESS, where students study English, and I made some presentations and show it in public. However, my English has never improved. So I came here to become good at English. I’m so glad that I was able to find this place. In the future, I want to study abroad and work in UK. I will do it. Or otherwise.


私は新たに英語を学ぶことにしました。私は幼稚園にいた頃から英語を勉強していましたが、役に立ったことはありません。私の住む国ではめったに英語は話されないので、私も英語を普段話しません。高校では、私はESSという生徒が英語を勉強するところのメンバーで、プレゼンを作ったりみんなの前で発表したりしました。しかし、英語は上手くなりませんでした。だから私は英語ができるようになるためにここに来ました。この場所を見つけられて本当に良かったです。将来は留学してイギリスで働きたいです。絶対やってやります。しないかもだけど。

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Started learning English newrecently

Recently is better since you're focusing on the time frame here.

I just decided to learn English newrecently.

I have studied English since I was in kindergarten, but that didn’t work very well.

Just sounds a bit more natural with the quantity-sounding term at the end.

I don’t usually use English because in my country people brarely talk in English.

In my high school, I was a member of ESS, where students study English, and I made some presentations andto show it off in public.

So I came here to become goodimprove at English.

improve is a more natural sounding word to use here.

In the future, I want to study abroad and work in the UK.

Most countries don't take "the", but the full name of the UK is "The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland" and the "the" is kept for abbreviations (like "the UK", "the United Kingdom") unless you just have the word "UK" on its own outside a sentence.

Or otherwielse.

I just decided to learn English newrecently.

I don’t usually use English because in my country people brarely talk in Englishspeak it.

In my high school, I was a member of ESS, where students study English, and I made some presentations and show ited them in public.

Started learning English newrecently

'Newly' is an adverb used before an adjective or past participle
Ex: 'Julia was newly married'
In your context, the word 'recently' would be better.
'Start' should be put in the past tense, since you've already started learning

I just decided to learn English newrecently.

'recently' vs. 'newly'

I have studied English since I was in kindergarten, but that didn’t work.

I don’t usually use English because in my country people barely talk in English.

In my high school, I was a member of ESS, where students study English, and I made some presentations and showed it in public.

'show' should be past tense, because you are talking about the past.

However, my English has never improved.

Or otherwise.

So, I don't understand what this means. 'Or Otherwise' is a sentence fragment, and it can't be on it's own. You can add to it, or remove it, but it has to be a full sentence (subject, object, verb).

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Overall, very good writing :). I think work on the past tense, but otherwise, your English was correct.

Start learning English newly


Started learning English newrecently

'Newly' is an adverb used before an adjective or past participle Ex: 'Julia was newly married' In your context, the word 'recently' would be better. 'Start' should be put in the past tense, since you've already started learning

Started learning English newrecently

Recently is better since you're focusing on the time frame here.

I just decided to learn English newly.


I just decided to learn English newrecently.

'recently' vs. 'newly'

I just decided to learn English newrecently.

I just decided to learn English newrecently.

I have studied English since I was in kindergarten, but that didn’t work.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have studied English since I was in kindergarten, but that didn’t work very well.

Just sounds a bit more natural with the quantity-sounding term at the end.

I don’t usually use English because in my country people barely talk in English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don’t usually use English because in my country people brarely talk in Englishspeak it.

I don’t usually use English because in my country people brarely talk in English.

In my high school, I was a member of ESS, where students study English, and I made some presentations and show it in public.


In my high school, I was a member of ESS, where students study English, and I made some presentations and showed it in public.

'show' should be past tense, because you are talking about the past.

In my high school, I was a member of ESS, where students study English, and I made some presentations and show ited them in public.

In my high school, I was a member of ESS, where students study English, and I made some presentations andto show it off in public.

However, my English has never improved.


However, my English has never improved.

So I came here to become good at English.


So I came here to become goodimprove at English.

improve is a more natural sounding word to use here.

I’m so glad that I was able to find this place.


In the future, I want to study abroad and work in UK.


In the future, I want to study abroad and work in the UK.

Most countries don't take "the", but the full name of the UK is "The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland" and the "the" is kept for abbreviations (like "the UK", "the United Kingdom") unless you just have the word "UK" on its own outside a sentence.

I will do it.


Or otherwise.


Or otherwise.

So, I don't understand what this means. 'Or Otherwise' is a sentence fragment, and it can't be on it's own. You can add to it, or remove it, but it has to be a full sentence (subject, object, verb).

Or otherwielse.

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