Sept. 25, 2025
Speaking task 2 ielt about Hometown
*Note:Fix for me the naturual of this speech, don’t care whether it is logical or not, whether it is good attitude or not,whether it is real or fake because this is just a practice essay,not a real opinion or emotion.
My hometown is Londo, the northern province of Somia. It is famous for inventing Hambugu, which is Somian iconic food. Moreover, the town ranks first throughout the country in Physics scores. In my opinion, visitors should try Londoan pho because it's irrestibly delicious, so good that you can never forget it, thanks to its secret family recipe.
What's more that I suggest you to try is local special baozi - a small pastry that goes well with a light meal. And I also recommend tourists to go to Aloski beach. to swim.
I assume that Londo is worthy to settle down due to low land prices. Moreover, it is surrounded by simple, peaceful natural scenery.That means you can have inexpensive house with landscapes that even luxury mansions would struggle to rival. Last but not least, there's never any traffic jam on the roads in my hometown.
*Lưu ý: giúp tôi sửa bài này để nó nghe tự nhiên hơn, không cần quan tâm đến logic, thái độ, hay tính thực tế, vì đây chỉ là một bài luyện tập, không phải ý kiến hay cảm xúc thật.
Quê tôi ở Londo, một tỉnh phía Bắc của Somia. Nơi đây nổi tiếng là nơi phát minh ra Hambugu, món ăn biểu tượng của Somia. Hơn nữa, tỉnh này đứng đầu cả nước về điểm môn Vật Lý. Theo tôi, du khách nên thử phở Londo vì nó ngon đến mức khó cưỡng, ngon đến mức bạn không bao giờ quên được, nhờ vào công thức bí truyền của gia đình.
Ngoài ra, tôi còn gợi ý bạn thử món bánh bao đặc sản địa phương – một loại bánh nhỏ rất hợp để ăn kèm bữa nhẹ. Tôi cũng khuyên du khách nên đến bãi biển Aloski để tắm biển.
Tôi cho rằng Londo rất đáng để định cư vì giá đất thấp. Hơn nữa, nơi đây được bao quanh bởi cảnh quan thiên nhiên giản dị, yên bình. Điều đó có nghĩa là bạn có thể sở hữu một ngôi nhà giá rẻ với phong cảnh mà ngay cả các biệt thự sang trọng cũng khó sánh kịp. Cuối cùng nhưng không kém phần quan trọng, đường xá ở quê tôi chưa bao giờ xảy ra tắc đường.
*Note:Fix for me the Make this speech sound naturual of this speech,for me, I don’t care whether it is logical or not, whether it is told with a good attitude or not, or whether it is real or fake because this is just a practice essay, not a real opinion or emotion.
"Fix for me the naturual of this speech" doesn't flow well "Make this speech sound natural for me" sounds more natural.
A subject (in this case I) is needed before "don't care".
Something cannot be good attitude but can have a good attitude.
or is needed before last item in list.
My hometown is Londo, in the northern province of Somia.
Without "in" it sounds like Londo is a province in a country called Somia
With "in" the sentence reads that Londo is a town in the province called Somia
It is famous for inventing Hhambugu, which is Somian iconic Somian food.
Foods aren't usually capitalized.
Adjectives almost always come before noun in English.
Moreover/Furthermore, the town ranks first throughoutthe highest in the country infor Physics scores.
Moreover is used correctly here but furthermore is more commonly used.
I adjusted your sentence to make it more clear and natural sounding.
In my opinion, visitors should try Londoan pho because it's irresistibly delicious, it's so good that you canwill never forget it, thanks to its secret family recipe.
What's more that I I also suggest you to try isry the local special baozi - a small pastry that goes well with/alongside a light meal.
"What's more that I suggest you to try is local special baozi" is a very wordy sentence that isn't completely clear. I changed a few things to make it more natural sounding and clear.
"With" is used correctly here but you could use "alongside" to elevate your writing a bit more.
And I also recommend that tourists to go to Aloski beach.
to swim.
This should be attached to the last sentence, it shouldn't stand alone.
I assume that Londo is a worthy place to settle down due tobecause of its low land/housing prices.
Without the word "place" in this sentence it sounds like Londo is settling down.
because of sounds more natural here than due to.
Moreover, it is surrounded by simple, peaceful and natural scenery. That means you can have an inexpensive house with landscapes that even luxury mansions would struggle to rival.
Last but not least, there's never any traffic jam on the roads in my hometown.
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Speaking task 2 ielt about Hometown |
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*Note:Fix for me the naturual of this speech, don’t care whether it is logical or not, whether it is good attitude or not,whether it is real or fake because this is just a practice essay,not a real opinion or emotion. *Note: "Fix for me the naturual of this speech" doesn't flow well "Make this speech sound natural for me" sounds more natural. A subject (in this case I) is needed before "don't care". Something cannot be good attitude but can have a good attitude. or is needed before last item in list. |
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My hometown is Londo, the northern province of Somia. My hometown is Londo, in the northern province of Somia. Without "in" it sounds like Londo is a province in a country called Somia With "in" the sentence reads that Londo is a town in the province called Somia |
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It is famous for inventing Hambugu, which is Somian iconic food. It is famous for inventing Foods aren't usually capitalized. Adjectives almost always come before noun in English. |
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Moreover, the town ranks first throughout the country in Physics scores. Moreover/Furthermore, the town ranks Moreover is used correctly here but furthermore is more commonly used. I adjusted your sentence to make it more clear and natural sounding. |
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In my opinion, visitors should try Londoan pho because it's irrestibly delicious, so good that you can never forget it, thanks to its secret family recipe. In my opinion, visitors should try Londoan pho because it's irresistibly delicious, it's so good that you |
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What's more that I suggest you to try is local special baozi - a small pastry that goes well with a light meal.
"What's more that I suggest you to try is local special baozi" is a very wordy sentence that isn't completely clear. I changed a few things to make it more natural sounding and clear. "With" is used correctly here but you could use "alongside" to elevate your writing a bit more. |
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And I also recommend tourists to go to Aloski beach. And I |
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to swim. to swim. This should be attached to the last sentence, it shouldn't stand alone. |
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I assume that Londo is worthy to settle down due to low land prices. I assume that Londo Without the word "place" in this sentence it sounds like Londo is settling down. because of sounds more natural here than due to. |
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Moreover, it is surrounded by simple, peaceful natural scenery.That means you can have inexpensive house with landscapes that even luxury mansions would struggle to rival. Moreover, it is surrounded by simple, peaceful and natural scenery. That means you can have an inexpensive house with landscapes that even luxury mansions would struggle to rival. |
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Last but not least, there's never any traffic jam on the roads in my hometown. Last but not least, there's never any traffic |
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