April 14, 2021
Song Title: 死了都要愛
In 2013 I was working at Beijing.
That was also the first time I listen to the above song.
It was a great song and very popular, most the young people can sing the whole song to me.
Some of them change the lyrics to become their theme song.
One year later after I go back to Hong Kong.
I ask all my friends to listen this song.
No one like it!
Last night (2021) I search this song again.
Actually, this is song still so popular even now.
I can found many singer sing this song with different style.
A good song always will be a good song, if you don’t listen is you’re loss.
In 2013, I was working atin Beijing.
That was also the first time I listened to the above song.
It was a great song and very popular, song, and most of the young people canould sing the whole song to me.
Some of them changed the lyrics to become their own theme song.
One year later, after I gowent back to Hong Kong, I asked all my friends to listen to this song.
Combine this sentence with the next one
One year later, after I went back to Hong Kong, I asked all my friends to listen to this song.
Combine this sentence with the previous one
No one liked it!
Last night, in (2021), I searched for this song again.
If you leave out "in 2021" you still need a comma: "Last night, I searched this song again"
I can fouind many singers that sing this song with a different style.
A good song will always will be a good song, and if you don’t listen, it is you’rer loss.
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I looked up the song, it is cool! Also, make sure that if you are telling a story about the past, you use the past tense in every verb.
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No one like it! No one liked it! |
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Song Title: 死了都要愛 |
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In 2013 I was working at Beijing. In 2013, I was working |
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That was also the first time I listen to the above song. That was also the |
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It was a great song and very popular, most the young people can sing the whole song to me. It was a great |
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Some of them change the lyrics to become their theme song. Some of them changed the lyrics to become their own theme song. |
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One year later after I go back to Hong Kong. One year later, after I Combine this sentence with the next one |
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I ask all my friends to listen this song. One year later, after I went back to Hong Kong, I asked all my friends to listen to this song. Combine this sentence with the previous one |
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Last night (2021) I search this song again. Last night, in If you leave out "in 2021" you still need a comma: "Last night, I searched this song again" |
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Actually, this is song still so popular even now. |
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I can found many singer sing this song with different style. I can f |
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A good song always will be a good song, if you don’t listen is you’re loss. A good song will always |
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