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ronpei

March 25, 2025

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Something pleasing

Yesterday, my husband stumbled on the road and was badly injured, especially on his face. His left eye was swollen and bruised, as if he had lost a boxing match. He looked very depressed. However, when I gave him his bento this morning as usual, he said "thank you", which was quite unusual. I was surprised that he seemed so docile. I felt a little sorry for him, but it's a little bit pleasing.


小気味いいこと

昨日、夫が道路で転んで、特に顔にひどい怪我をしました。左目は腫れて、まるでボクシングの試合に負けたかのようにあざができていました。とても落ち込んでいるようでした。しかし、今朝いつものようにお弁当を渡すと、珍しく「ありがとう」と言ってくれました。とてもしおらしい様子で驚きました。少しかわいそうに思いましたが、小気味いいです。

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Something pleasing

Yesterday, my husband stumbled on the road and was badly injured, especially on his face.

His left eye was swollen and bruised, as if he had lost a boxing match.

He looked very depressed.

However, when I gave him his bentoox lunch this morning as usual, he said "thank you", which was quite unusual.

I was surprised that he seemed so docile.

Something pleasing

Yesterday, my husband stumbled on the road and was badly injured, especially on his face.

His left eye was swollen and bruised, as if he had lost a boxing match.

He looked very depressed.

However, when I gave him his bento this morning as usual, he said "thank you", which was quite unusual.

I was surprised that he seemed so docile.

I felt a little sorry for him, but it's also a little bit pleasing.

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ronpei

March 25, 2025

1

Thank you for the corrections.

Something pleasing

Yesterday, my husband stumbled on the road and was badly injured, especially on his face.

His left eye was swollen and bruised, as if he had lost a boxing match.

He looked very depressed.

However, when I gave him his bento this morning as usual, he said "thank you", which was quite unusual.

I was surprised that he seemed so docile.

I felt a little sorry for him, but it's also a little bit pleasing.

ronpei's avatar
ronpei

March 25, 2025

1

Thank you for your corrections.

Something pleasing


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Something pleasing

Yesterday, my husband fell down on the road and was badly injured, especially on his face.


His left eye was swollen and bruised, as if he had lost a boxing match.


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He looked very depressed.


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However, when I gave him his bento this morning as usual, he said "thank you", which was quite unusual.


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However, when I gave him his bentoox lunch this morning as usual, he said "thank you", which was quite unusual.

I was surprised that he seemed so docile.


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I felt a little sorry for him, but a little bit pleasing.


I felt a little sorry for him, but it's a little bit pleasing.


I felt a little sorry for him, but it's also a little bit pleasing.

I felt a little sorry for him, but it's also a little bit pleasing.

Yesterday, my husband stumbled on the road and was badly injured, especially on his face.


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Yesterday, my husband stumbled on the road and was badly injured, especially on his face.

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