April 23, 2025
"Social media is the new opium of the masses"
Parties on yachts moored at wharfs with pristine water beaches nearby; flawless canonical bodies popping out incessantly on your screen; lessons showcasing how to become a behemoth of finances; throngs of minds that long to fulfil their desire to indulge themselves in some unattainable lives. Ideals fostered by the messages consumers receive continuously and whose meaning outlives its spelling.
In the wake of the rampant pervasiveness of social content, not only do consumers have to grapple with their non-living-the-life thing -not as much a free but humble existence as a pretentious and capricious one-, but they also have to prevent themselves from having their thinking moulded by the content exhibited on their screens: the more content you swallow, the better; if radical, selected. Once launched, the content strikes every nook of the internet which, unlike its narcotic counterpart, is consumed by the vast majority of the global population.
Hence, a question needs to be posed: should you initiate a vicious circle, what would be the most worrying issue? If nothing, the reiterated intake of depraved, belligerent and explicit words in the shape multimedia that looms unwary users who flock to watch it, for what is detrimental is our getting accustomed to digesting such a dreadful content without even blinking our eyes.
For all intents and purposes, social media has the power to shape ideals and mindsets and may be a double-edged sword in the wrong hands. Be it by mere misfortune, be it due to mischievous intentions, the tool is reaping what was sown. Better off should we nip it in the bud.
"Social media is the new opium of the masses"
Parties on yachts moored at wharfs with pristine water beaches nearby; flawless canonical bodies popping out incessantly on your screen; lessons showcasing how to become a behemoth of finances; throngs of minds that long to fulfill their desire to indulge themselves in some unattainable lives.
Ideals fostered by the messages consumers receive continuously and whose meaning outlives its spelling.
In the wake of the rampant pervasiveness of social content, not only do consumers have to grapple with their non-living-the-life thing -not as much a free but humble existence as a pretentious and capricious one-, but they also have to prevent themselves from having their thinking be moulded by the content exhibited on their screens: the more content you swallow, the better; if radical, selected.
Once launched, the content strikes every nook of the internet which, unlike its narcotic counterpart, is consumed by the vast majority of the global population.
Hence, a question needs to be posed: should you initiate a vicious cirycle, what would be the most worrying issue?
If nothing, the reiterated intake of depraved, belligerent and explicit words in the shape multimedia that looms unwary users who flock to watch it, for what is detrimental is our getting accustomed to digesting such a dreadful content without even blinking our eyes.
For all intents and purposes, social media has the power to shape ideals and mindsets and may be a double-edged sword in the wrong hands.
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Very profound English. Impressive vocabulary. I'm just not sure how to correctly use punctuations like " - " but when you are reading books, writers seem to put punctuations anywhere as long as it is easy to read and it smoothens the flow of the story/words.
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"Social media is the new opium of the masses" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Parties on yachts moored at wharfs with pristine water beaches nearby; flawless canonical bodies popping out incessantly on your screen; lessons showcasing how to become a behemoth of finances; throngs of minds that long to fulfil their desire to indulge themselves in some unattainable lives. Parties on yachts moored at wharfs with pristine water beaches nearby; flawless canonical bodies popping out incessantly on your screen; lessons showcasing how to become a behemoth of finances; throngs of minds that long to fulfill their desire to indulge themselves in some unattainable lives. |
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Ideals fostered by the messages consumers receive continuously and whose meaning outlives its spelling. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the wake of the rampant pervasiveness of social content, not only do consumers have to grapple with their non-living-the-life thing -not as much a free but humble existence as a pretentious and capricious one-, but they also have to prevent themselves from having their thinking moulded by the content exhibited on their screens: the more content you swallow, the better; if radical, selected. In the wake of the rampant pervasiveness of social content, not only do consumers have to grapple with their non-living-the-life thing -not as much a free but humble existence as a pretentious and capricious one-, but they also have to prevent themselves from having their thinking be moulded by the content exhibited on their screens: the more content you swallow, the better; if radical, selected. |
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Once launched, the content strikes every nook of the internet which, unlike its narcotic counterpart, is consumed by the vast majority of the global population. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Hence, a question needs to be posed: should you initiate a vicious circle, what would be the most worrying issue? Hence, a question needs to be posed: should you initiate a vicious c |
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If nothing, the reiterated intake of depraved, belligerent and explicit words in the shape multimedia that looms unwary users who flock to watch it, for what is detrimental is our getting accustomed to digesting such a dreadful content without even blinking our eyes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For all intents and purposes, social media has the power to shape ideals and mindsets and may be a double-edged sword in the wrong hands. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Be it by mere misfortune, be it due to mischievous intentions, the tool is reaping what was sown. |
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Better off should we nip it in the bud. |
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