Sept. 5, 2025
Social Media: Good or Bad?
Social media is an online platform where people can learn, share, buy things, have fun, and interact with others. People of all ages use it, and it has become an important part of our daily lives. Social media has both positive and negative sides. How it affects us depends on how we use it.
When used carefully and correctly, social media can make communication easier, give quick access to information, provide opportunities for work, education, and marketing, improve creativity, and raise awareness. However, using social media too much or without thinking can have negative effects. Spending too much time online can lead to addiction, comparison with others, low self-esteem, and feeling lonely. It can also cause security problems, spread false information, and give space for cyberbullying.
Sometimes, we need to take a break from social media. This is called a digital detox. A digital detox means staying away from online platforms for a while, which can be a few hours or even weeks. This helps reduce screen time, improve social relationships, sleep better, and balance both mental and physical health.
In conclusion, social media is an important part of life with both opportunities and risks. As we said at the beginning, its effects mostly depend on how people use it. If we use it correctly, it makes life easier; if we use it too much, it can cause problems. Therefore, it is important to keep a balance and take a digital detox when needed. This way, we can enjoy the benefits of social media and reduce its negative effects.
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Sept. 9, 2025
thank u so much!
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Social media is somewhat insidious in that it can create a rift between individuals within a sphere while obfuscating the symptoms through a superficial connection to others beyond their immediate social sphere. As a result, while many who use social media are not necessary deeply connected to anyone in particular, they may not necessarily feel the usual effects associated with loneliness.
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Overall a well-written post. If I were to make an estimate, I would say that your current English ability seems to be around that of an average native high-schooler, which is actually very impressive. I would even go as far as to say that if someone were handed a collection of anonymous high school papers on this exact subject and was told that one of them was from an L2-English learner: There would likely be many who would fail to identify you.
Considering that most natives operate at around a sixth-grade level, this places you ahead of the curve—and if you can speak as well as you type, you could probably do just fine with your English—however I believe that you can still take it to even greater heights, if only you pursue it.
Sept. 9, 2025
thank you so much!
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Social media is an online platform where people can learn, share, buy things, have fun, and interact with others. Social media is Unless you were talking about a specific site that was called "Social Media", it should be worded as such Social media |
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People of all ages use it, and it has become an important part of our daily lives. |
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Social media has both positive and negative sides. |
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How it affects us depends on how we use it. |
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When used carefully and correctly, social media can make communication easier, give quick access to information, provide opportunities for work, education, and marketing, improve creativity, and raise awareness. |
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However, using social media too much or without thinking can have negative effects. |
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Spending too much time online can lead to addiction, comparison with others, low self-esteem, and feeling lonely. Spending too much time online can lead to addiction, comparison with others, low self-esteem, and Social media is somewhat insidious in that it can create a rift between individuals within a sphere while obfuscating the symptoms through a superficial connection to others beyond their immediate social sphere. As a result, while many who use social media are not necessary deeply connected to anyone in particular, they may not necessarily feel the usual effects associated with loneliness. Spending too much time online can lead to addiction, comparison with others, low self-esteem, and I changed the last item in the list to be more noun-like to match with the other noun clauses |
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It can also cause security problems, spread false information, and give space for cyberbullying. It Since social media is just a platform, it cannot, properly speaking—"do" much of anything. It can, however, serve as a "platform" for various manners of human degeneracy. |
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Sometimes, we need to take a break from social media. |
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This is called a digital detox. |
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A digital detox means staying away from online platforms for a while, which can be a few hours or even weeks. |
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This helps reduce screen time, improve social relationships, sleep better, and balance both mental and physical health. |
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In conclusion, social media is an important part of life with both opportunities and risks. In conclusion, social media is an important part of life Setting up for the subsequent lines |
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As we said at the beginning, its effects mostly depend on how people use it.
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If we use it correctly, it makes life easier; if we use it too much, it can cause problems. |
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Therefore, it is important to keep a balance and take a digital detox when needed. |
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This way, we can enjoy the benefits of social media and reduce its negative effects. This way, we can enjoy the benefits of social media Polished it up a bit |
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