June 8, 2021
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I woke up against my will that I want to sleep more. This is because it is now 2 o'clock in the afternoon, but reaches 32 Celsius degree. In the status of being awake, I can tolerate this temperature, but in the sleep, this temperature is limitation I can continue to sleep. This is the problem for me who have mostly been sleeping in the noon and afternoon in Japan since I was starting the U.S. stocks actively. I might fall into suffering for the lack of sleep from now on during this summer as long as the temperature continues to rise or be unchanged. So, I feel trouble. I am going to take a shower, anyway.
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I might fall into suffering for thesuffer from a lack of sleep from now on during this summer as long asif the temperature continues to rise or be unchangedstays the same.
So, I feel troubled.
Another option: "I am troubled."
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So Hot
I woke up against my will that: I wanted to sleep more/longer.
This is because it is now 2 o'clock in the afternoon, but the temperature has reachesd 32 degrees Celsius degree.
In the status of beingWhile awake, I can tolerate this temperature, but in thwhile sleeping, this temperature is limitation I cankeeps me from continueing to sleep.
This is the aproblem for me whobecause I have mostly been sleeping in thearound noon and in the afternoon in Japan ever since I was started actively observing? the U.S. stocks actively.
So, I feel trouble.
I am going to take a shower, anyway.
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June 10, 2021
You did very good corrections for me. Thank you very much also on this diary.
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So Hot This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I woke up against my will that I want to sleep more. I woke up against my will |
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This is because it is now 2 p.m. in the afternoon, but reaches 32 Celsius degree. |
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In the status of being awake, I can tolerate this temperature, but in the sleep, this temperature is limitation I can continue to sleep.
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This is the problem for me who have mostly been sleeping in the noon and afternoon in Japan since I was starting the U.S. stocks actively. This is |
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I might fall to suffer for the lack of sleep from now on during this summer as long as the temperature continues to rise or be unchanged. |
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So, I feel trouble. This sentence has been marked as perfect! So, I feel troubled. Another option: "I am troubled." |
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I am going to shower, anyway. |
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I am going to take a shower, anyway. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I might fall into suffering for the lack of sleep from now on during this summer as long as the temperature continues to rise or be unchanged. I might |
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This is because it is now 2 o'clock in the afternoon, but reaches 32 Celsius degree. This is because it is now 2 o'clock in the afternoon, but the temperature has reache |
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