April 21, 2025
Slingshot
From now on, I will write journals whenever I think of something. This will solve the problem of struggling to find topics, even though I have written about some topics several times.
One thing I liked most was playing with a slingshot. Life for children decades ago was really boring because we didn’t have any commercial toys. The “toys” we played with were mud, tree branches and crop straws. Therefore, the slingshot became a favorite.
The slingshot I played with was not a product from a factory, but a toy I made myself. A slingshot consisted of the following parts: a frame, rubber bands and an oval piece of leather.
It was very easy to find a piece of thick steel wire in the countryside, which was used to make the frame. Since the steel wire was very hard to bend, I usually used a pair of hand pliers to shape it.
The rubber bands I used for the slingshot were very common, as they were mainly used to tie girls’ hair.
Another component was an oval piece of leather, which served as a holder for the “bullets”—the small round stones.
After assembling these three parts, the slingshot was ready, and I could use it to shoot birds for fun.
I might have shot down a few small, unnamed birds, but one thing I am sure of is that I took the middle school entrance exam with my slingshot in my upper left pocket.
This will solve the problem of struggling to find topics, even though I have written about some topics several times before.
A slingshot consisted of the following parts: a frame, rubber bands and an oval-shaped piece of leather.
Another component was an oval-shaped piece of leather, which served as a holder for the “bullets”—the small round stones.
From now on, I will write journal entries whenever I think of something.
This will solve the problem of struggling to find topics, even though I have written about some topics several times.
Life for children decades ago was really boring because we didn’t have any commercial toys.
The “toys” we played with were mud, tree branches and crop straws.
Therefore, the slingshot became a favorite of mine.
You could also say “the slingshot was every kid’s favorite toy” or “the slingshot became my favorite.”
The slingshot I played with was not a product from a factory, but a toy I made myself.
A slingshot consisted of the following parts: a frame, rubber bands and an oval piece of leather.
It was very easy to find a piece of thick steel wire in the countryside, which was used to make the frame.
Since the steel wire was very hard to bend, I usually used a pair of hand pliers to shape it.
The rubber bands I used for the slingshot were very common, as they were mainly used to tie girls’ hair.
Another component was an oval piece of leather, which served as a holder for the “bullets”—the small round stones.
After assembling these three parts, the slingshot was ready, and I could use it to shoot birds for fun.
I might have shot down a few small, unnamed birds, but one thing I am sure of is that I took the middle school entrance exam with my slingshot in my upper left pocket.
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Amazing grammar—-and you wrote a great story! I love that last sentence. Keep up the good writing!
April 21, 2025
Thank you very much.
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Slingshot |
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From now on, I will write journals whenever I think of something. From now on, I will write journal entries whenever I think of something. |
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This will solve the problem of struggling to find topics, even though I have written about some topics several times. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This will solve the problem of struggling to find topics, even though I have written about some topics several times before. |
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One thing I liked most was playing with a slingshot. |
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Life for children decades ago was really boring because we didn’t have any commercial toys. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The “toys” we played with were mud, tree branches and crop straws. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Therefore, the slingshot became a favorite. Therefore, the slingshot became a favorite of mine. You could also say “the slingshot was every kid’s favorite toy” or “the slingshot became my favorite.” |
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The slingshot I played with was not a product from a factory, but a toy I made myself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A slingshot consisted of the following parts: a frame, rubber bands and an oval piece of leather. This sentence has been marked as perfect! A slingshot consisted of the following parts: a frame, rubber bands and an oval-shaped piece of leather. |
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It was very easy to find a piece of thick steel wire in the countryside, which was used to make the frame. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since the steel wire was very hard to bend, I usually used a pair of hand pliers to shape it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The rubber bands I used for the slingshot were very common, as they were mainly used to tie girls’ hair. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Another component was an oval piece of leather, which served as a holder for the “bullets”—the small round stones. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Another component was an oval-shaped piece of leather, which served as a holder for the “bullets”—the small round stones. |
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After assembling these three parts, the slingshot was ready, and I could use it to shoot birds for fun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I might have shot down a few small, unnamed birds, but one thing I am sure of is that I took the middle school entrance exam with my slingshot in my upper left pocket. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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