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AikawaMizore

May 21, 2021

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Slight enjoyment for the weekend

A spaceflight company which I have invested three times or four times is set to loft its long-awaiting and several setbacks experienced test spaceship into the orbit of our planet on Saturday, tomorrow. Although Cathie Wood and the corporate insiders sold parts of their shares several weeks ago amid growth stocks' relentless selloff, thanks to the news I also sold successfully my holdings at a not bad point at around 23% surge from the previous day in line with reportedly, although by chance, Cathie Wood' disposing of almost all her shares, who though I don't like as one of critics against her, in terms of overevaluating her positions and making bad and highly risky decisions in many points.

In this company's spaceship, although I don't know whether it lies in this time's spaceship, as a seats material, a product whose company's share also I have now is supposed to be used. Besides, two pilots is said to embark. So I hope this mission will finish successfully with slight enjoyment because I am not a man of enthusiasm about something like this sort of futuristic missions, but rather I am an investing nerd eyeing reality and our healthy lives and society.

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A Slight enjoyment for the wEntertainment this Weekend

In English, the first letter of all verbs, nouns, adjectives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.

A spaceflight company, which I have invested in three times or four times, is set to loftaunch its long-awaiting and several setbacks experienced test spaceship into the orbit oftest spaceship, which has experienced several setbacks, into our planet's orbit on Saturday, or in other words, tomorrow.

Although Cathie Wood and the corporate insiders sold parts of their shares several weeks ago amid growth stocks' relentless selloff, thanks to the news I also sold successfully sold my holdings at a not badbetter point at, around 23% surge from the previous day, in line with reportedly, although by chance, Cathie Wood' disposing of almost all her shares, who t. Though I don't like asher and I'm one of her critics against her, in terms of, because she overevaluatinges her positions and makinges bad and highly risky decisions in many pointsoften.

In this company's spaceship, although I don't know whether it lie's in this time's spaceship, as ae current model, the seats' material, is a product whosefrom a company's share in which I also I have now is supposed to be useda share.

Besides, tTwo pilots isare also said to be embarking.

So I hope this mission will finish successfully withand be slightly enjoymentertaining, though not because I am not a man of enthusiasm about something like thisthese sort of futuristic missions, but rather I am an investingment nerd eyeing reality and our healthy lives and society.

"I am" is often written/said as "I'm".

I don't really know what you mean by "Our healthy lives and society".

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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AikawaMizore

May 23, 2021

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I am sorry, but I cannot adopt your correction totally because my intended feeling was lost and revamped into the different direction. But in some parts, I learned from your correction. Thank you.

Slight enjoyment for the weekend


A Slight enjoyment for the wEntertainment this Weekend

In English, the first letter of all verbs, nouns, adjectives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.

A spaceflight company which I have invested three times or four times is set to loft its long-awaiting and several setbacks experienced test spaceship into the orbit of our planet on Saturday, tomorrow.


A spaceflight company, which I have invested in three times or four times, is set to loftaunch its long-awaiting and several setbacks experienced test spaceship into the orbit oftest spaceship, which has experienced several setbacks, into our planet's orbit on Saturday, or in other words, tomorrow.

Although Cathie Wood and the corporate Insiders sold parts of their shares several weeks ago amid growth stocks' relentless selloff, thanks to the news I also sold successfully my holdings at a not bad point at around 23% surge from the previous day in line with reportedly, although by chance, Cathie Wood' disposing almost all shares, who though I don't like, in terms of overevaluating her positions and making bad and highly risky decisions in many points.


In this company's spaceship, although I don't know whether it lies in this time's spaceship, as a seats material, a product whose company's share also I have now is supposed to be used.


In this company's spaceship, although I don't know whether it lie's in this time's spaceship, as ae current model, the seats' material, is a product whosefrom a company's share in which I also I have now is supposed to be useda share.

Besides, two pilots is said to embark.


Besides, tTwo pilots isare also said to be embarking.

So I hope this mission will finish successfully with slight enjoyment because I am not a man of enthusiasm about something like this sort of futuristic missions, but rather I am an investing nerd eyeing reality and our healthy lives and society.


So I hope this mission will finish successfully withand be slightly enjoymentertaining, though not because I am not a man of enthusiasm about something like thisthese sort of futuristic missions, but rather I am an investingment nerd eyeing reality and our healthy lives and society.

"I am" is often written/said as "I'm". I don't really know what you mean by "Our healthy lives and society".

Although Cathie Wood and the corporate Insiders sold parts of their shares several weeks ago amid growth stocks' relentless selloff, thanks to the news I also sold successfully my holdings at a not bad point at around 23% surge from the previous day in line with reportedly, although by chance, Cathie Wood' disposing of almost all her shares, who though I don't like, in terms of overevaluating her positions and making bad and highly risky decisions in many points.


Although Cathie Wood and the corporate Insiders sold parts of their shares several weeks ago amid growth stocks' relentless selloff, thanks to the news I also sold successfully my holdings at a not bad point at around 23% surge from the previous day in line with reportedly, although by chance, Cathie Wood' disposing of almost all her shares, who though I don't like as one of critics, in terms of overevaluating her positions and making bad and highly risky decisions in many points.


Although Cathie Wood and the corporate Insiders sold parts of their shares several weeks ago amid growth stocks' relentless selloff, thanks to the news I also sold successfully my holdings at a not bad point at around 23% surge from the previous day in line with reportedly, although by chance, Cathie Wood' disposing of almost all her shares, who though I don't like as one of critics against her, in terms of overevaluating her positions and making bad and highly risky decisions in many points.


Although Cathie Wood and the corporate insiders sold parts of their shares several weeks ago amid growth stocks' relentless selloff, thanks to the news I also sold successfully my holdings at a not bad point at around 23% surge from the previous day in line with reportedly, although by chance, Cathie Wood' disposing of almost all her shares, who though I don't like as one of critics against her, in terms of overevaluating her positions and making bad and highly risky decisions in many points.


Although Cathie Wood and the corporate insiders sold parts of their shares several weeks ago amid growth stocks' relentless selloff, thanks to the news I also sold successfully sold my holdings at a not badbetter point at, around 23% surge from the previous day, in line with reportedly, although by chance, Cathie Wood' disposing of almost all her shares, who t. Though I don't like asher and I'm one of her critics against her, in terms of, because she overevaluatinges her positions and makinges bad and highly risky decisions in many pointsoften.

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