June 5, 2021
Sleepy
Writing something in a learning language every day is hard. I want to dive into a bed right away, but I have to write something.
Today, I also went out. Only countable persons were not wearing a mask, albeit including myself. (giggle)
It is not that I want people to do the same. I determine it by myself. When it seems riskier, I will wear a mask.
Otherwise, I will never wear a mask as far as possible. Using a mask every day is costly, and when everyone in the world do the similar things, environmental impact by disposing of them will not be able to be ignored.
I cannot continue to write today. I cannot win strong sleepiness.
Sleepy
Writing something in a learning language every day is hardIt is hard to write something everyday in a language one is learning.
Writing it this way makes the sentence flow better and is easier to say and understand.
I want to dive into a bed right away, but I have to write something.
It’s not wrong to have “a” there, but it is redundant and therefore unnecessary.
Today, I also went out.
Only countable personsertain people were not wearing a mask, albeit including myself.
“Countable” isn’t really used to describe a quantity of people
“Persons” is used in the English language but I required specific things since it would describe a lot of people from a lot of places
“Albeit”- I’m not really sure how you are trying to use it in this sentence, nonetheless it’s incorrect. You really don’t need it. It’s also not commonly used.
(giggle)
It is not that I want people to do the same.
I determined it by myself.
When it seems riskier, I will wear a mask.
Otherwise, I will never wear a mask as far as possible.
Using a mask every day is costly, and when everyone in the world does the similarame things, the environmental impact by disposing of them will not be able to be ignored.
Good sentence. Just has some grammar mistakes
I cannot continue to write today.
I cannot win against strong sleepiness.
Feedback
Good job! Do, however, keep yourself safe against Covid-19. The mistakes you made are not bad. It was mostly usage and grammar. You will improve as you continue to learn English. Best of luck!
June 5, 2021
I wanted to describe continuous will that has already been there since the outbreak and will be there by using this sentence ''I determine it by myself.'' So, I could not use past tense because my decision was not abruptly changed yesterday.
And I wanted to imply the fact that surprisingly I was also a person who didn't wear a mask, by using ''albeit'' against assumed will of readers.
I have read all these variants in sentences, a person, persons, people, and even ''peoples.''
In this sentence, the focus is whether an individual person wore a mask or not.
That's why I used persons not ''people'' in general which probably signifies a class or a group.
Thank you for correcting me.
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Sleepy This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Writing something in a learning language every day is hard.
Writing it this way makes the sentence flow better and is easier to say and understand. |
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I want to dive into a bed right away, but I have to write something. I want to dive into It’s not wrong to have “a” there, but it is redundant and therefore unnecessary. |
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Today, I also went out. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Only countable persons were not wearing a mask, albeit including myself. Only c “Countable” isn’t really used to describe a quantity of people “Persons” is used in the English language but I required specific things since it would describe a lot of people from a lot of places “Albeit”- I’m not really sure how you are trying to use it in this sentence, nonetheless it’s incorrect. You really don’t need it. It’s also not commonly used. |
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(giggle) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is not that I want people to do the same. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I determine it by myself. I determined it by myself. |
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When it seems riskier, I will wear a mask. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Otherwise, I will never wear a mask as far as possible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Using a mask every day is costly, and when everyone in the world do the similar things, environmental impact by disposing of them will not be able to be ignored. Using a mask every day is costly, and when everyone in the world does the s Good sentence. Just has some grammar mistakes |
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I cannot continue to write today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I cannot win strong sleepiness. I cannot win against strong sleepiness. |
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