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The first movie of ShrekShrek movie is one of my favorites.

It wais so simple, funny and breakings stereotypes.

During my childhood, I watched many times princess movies where the delicately and poor princcess find thes "true eternal love" with a refined and educated prince.

Barbies movie's are a good example of this.

Instead, Shrek isn't a prince,; he is a lonely and sentimental ogre thatwho falls in love with an unusual princess.

I know that probably there is a lot ofthere are probably better examples about" for "how to break a stereotype", but as a child, it was maybe the first time I watched something that impacted me so much.

Fiona is a realistic woman for me, instead of a perfect princess.

She can protect herself, and fight.

She has good manners but also enjoy to bes being more comfortable and less refinated (burping or eating rats, for example).

She can feel angry, be uncomfortable, disagree with others, and reflect abouton her actions.

For example, when she heard the conversation ofbetween Shrek withand Burro (Donkey I guess, I don't know what is his name in English) about people criticizing and stigmatizing himShrek because he's an ogre, she regrets her actions and reflects on her words and how to be a better person.

He is called "Donkey" in the English version.
If you use "when" this way, then the phrase becomes a dependent clause and can't stand on its own, so I combined it with your next sentence.

Then she regrets, reflecting about her words, trying to be better after that.

Combined with the previous sentence

Shrek is so asocial in the beginning because of how the world, treats him, and I know and understand that feeling.

The "terrible and ugly ogre" haves feelings, and this fact changes your perspective and gives you a good lesson: Don't judge someone just for it'stheir appearance.

Shrek loved Fiona not because "she is a princess", he met her better, falling in lovebut because he really liked how was sheer true personality.

I'm not sure what you meant by "he met her better."

Fiona growew up alone in a tower, waiting for a magical love ofut of a fairytales.

She didn't excluded Shrek because "he isn't a prince",; she loved him even knowing he is an ogre and that she will stay as an ogre.

They teachedaught me something that I dihadn't realized for a long time.

True love isn't perfect, and you don't need a perfect fairytale in real life to be happy.

Happiness is what matters, not being a perfect person in couplepaired with another perfect person.

It's more important to enjoy your life thatn to be what other people wants to you to be.

Burro (dDonkey I guess),) is a good friend.

He's always trying to be nice, smiling and being funnyfunny and smile.

But he also can be angry, serious, sad and miss somelonely.

Burro encouraged Shrek to don'tnot to give up withon Fiona.

That's a good example about how isof how to be a genuine friend, someone who honestly cares and helps you in difficult moments.

So, fFor all these reasons I love this movie.

I admit that I'm not a cinephile, and usually, it's disgusting for me to watch a movie.

Or: "I admit that I'm not a cinephile, and usually, I detest watching movies."

Thanks for your time,. I hope to did itI wrote better this time.

I feel really ashamed and clumsy thinking about how many errors I have againmade, but it's part of learning.

(Before I start, I didn't learned about gramatical rules,. I know that I should to do it soon. This probably has many errors, but I'm trying to do it better).)

Alternatively, you could say "haven't learned" instead of "didn't learn" if you want.
Your last sentence was correct, but the extra "it" is clear though context, so it sounds a little unnatural.

The first movie of ShrekShrek movie is one of my favorites.

Again, sounds more natural this way.

It was so simple, funny, and breakingoke many stereotypes.

During my childhood, I watched many times princess movies where the delicately and poor princcess find thes "true eternal love" with a refined and educated prince.

Barbies movie's are a good example of this.

Instead, Shrek isn't a prince, he isbut a lonely and sentimental ogre that falls in love with an unusual princess.

Instead of "he is", adding "but" sounds more natural and emphasises the contrast between Shrek and the stereotypical prince.

I know that there probably there is a lot of better examples about" how to break a stereotype", but as a child it was maybeare many better examples of this but as a child, Shrek was probably the first time I watched something that impacted me so much.

She can protect herself, and fight.

She has good manners, but also enjoy to bes being more comfortable and less refinated (burping or eating rats, for example).

For example, when she heard the conversation of Shrek with Burro (Donkey I guess, I don't know what is his name in English is) about people criticizing and stigmatizing him because he's an ogre.,

This sentence can be combined with the next one.

Then she regrets, reflectings about her words, trying to be better after thatand tries to be kinder.

"after that" is redundant, so it can be removed to sound more natural.

Shrek is so antisocial in the beginning because of the world, and I know and understand that feeling.

The "terrible and ugly ogre" haves feelings, too. This fact changes your perspective and give ysends out a good lesson: Don't judge someone just for it'sby their appearance.

Shrek loved Fiona not because "she is a princess", he met her better,but he faelling in love with her because he really liked how was sheer personality.

Not exactly sure what you meant by "he met her better" here.

Fiona growew up alone in a tower, waiting for athe magical love ofrom the fairytales.

She didn't excluded Shrek because "he iwasn't a prince", but she loved him even knowing that he is an ogre and that she willould stay as an ogre.

They teachedaught me something that I didn't realized for a long time.

Happiness is what matters, not being a perfect person in coupletogether with another perfect person.

It's more important to enjoy your life thatn to be what people wants to you to be.

But he also can be angry, serious, sad, and miss someone.

Burro encouraged Shrek to don'not give up with Fiona.

That's a good example about how isof a genuine friend, someone who honestly cares and will helps you in difficult momenttimes.

So, for all these reasons, I love this movie.

I admit that I'm not a cinephile,usually not one for movies, as usually it is disgusting for me to watch a movie.

Not sure what you meant by cinephile exactly.

Thanks for your time, I hope toI did it better this time.

I feel really ashamed and clumsy thinking about how many errors I have againprobably have, but it's part of learning.

This just sounds a little more natural, but your original sentence works too.