Sept. 26, 2025
Show That Disappointed Me
Recently I finished watching a show. That shows has name "Mr.Robot". It's a story about Elliot Anderson. During the day he a normal employe of the company. But night Elliot hacks various crimanls. He dreaming about world revolution and destroying big companys. He also suffers from social phobia and talking with himself. One day Elliot bacomes member of a haker group. The purpose of which destroy "E Corp"(E Corp biggest corporation in the world Mr.Robot).
First season was beautiful. Intresting characters and plot, riddles, paranoid atmosphere. But then something happeneds.
Second season mostly slowly. Sometimes characters doing ilogical things, many empty conversation. But this seasons has realy god series, who can surprised viewer. In general season feeling like warm up before something bigger.
Thirdy season. The real problems are just begining. The show lost it's character. Atmosphere fisrt season gone, also logic. The plot continues moving because it needs writer. Elliot`s story could ended many times if not deus ex machina.
Fourth season. The grand final this epic story. All season feels like young adult. Many "characters function", stupid plot twist, stupid logic main antagonist.
A Show That Disappointed Me
RI recently I finished watching a show.
To me, this sounds more natural.
Thate shows has name was called "Mr. Robot".
It's only one show, so you should use the singular "show" and not the plural "shows".
It's a story about Elliot Anderson.
During the day he is a normal employee of thea company.
This is the first time you've mentioned the company, so "a company" is more natural than "the company".
But at night, Elliot hacks various criminanls.
He dreamings about world revolution and destroying big companyies.
"Company" is an irregular noun. The plural form is "companies".
He also suffers from social phobia and talking withs to himself.
(1) Social phobia is more commonly known as social anxiety.
(2) I think "talks to" is more natural here. "Talks with" might be used in situations where there is more than one person.
One day Elliot baecomes a member of a hacker group.,
You can merge this sentence with the one below.
Tthe purpose of which is to destroy "E E-Corp" (E -Corp is the biggest corporation in the world of Mr. Robot).
You don't need quotation marks around company names.
FThe first season was beautiful.
Interesting characters and plot, riddles, and a paranoid atmosphere.
But then something happeneds.
SThe second season was mostly slowly.
"Slowly" is an adverb, used to describe an action. The adjective is "slow".
Sometimes characters doingid illogical things, and there were many empty conversations.
[But this seasons has realy god series, who can surprised viewer.]?
I'm not too sure about what you meant to convey here. If you can provide me the native text in Ukrainian, I can help you further.
In general season feeling likeOverall, it felt like it was warming up before something bigger.
Thirdy season.
The real problems are just beginning.
The show lost it's character.
AThe atmosphere fisrrom the first season is gone, alsos well as the logic.
The plot continues moving because it needs a writer.
I'm not too sure how the plot needing a writer causes it to continue moving forward.
Elliot`'s story could have ended many times if not for deus ex machina.
Fourth season.
The grand finale in this epic story.
All the seasons feelslt like they were geared towards young adults.
I'm not 100% sure what you meant by this sentence, but I took my best guess at it.
Many "characters lacked a real function", stupidthe plot twist, was stupid logic, and so was the main antagonist.
I'm not too sure what you meant by "character function", but I again took my best guess. Are you trying to say that many characters had no real function in the plot?
Sept. 28, 2025
Thanks for the corrections! Below, I provide you with the native text the sentence that you didn't understand.
"But this seasons has realy good series, who can surprised viewer" - Але цей сезон має дійсно хороші серії, які можуть здивувати глядача.
Sept. 28, 2025
Thanks for the native text! For this sentence, you can translate it like this: "But this season has some really good episodes that can surprise the viewer."
(1) Since you're only referring to one season (the second season), "seasons" should be singular ("season").
(2) Misspelling: it's "really" and not "realy".
(3) A series refers to a collection or sequence of episodes. In fact, Mr. Robot is a series that contains four seasons of episodes.
(4) "Who" is mostly used when referring to humans. Since a season is obviously not a human, we do not use "who", but rather "that".
(5) "Can" is in the present tense, so "surprised" should be in the present tense as well ("surprise"). Also note that since "episodes" is plural, we also use "surprise" instead of "surprises".
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Recently I finished watching a show.
To me, this sounds more natural. |
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That shows has name "Mr.Robot". Th It's only one show, so you should use the singular "show" and not the plural "shows". |
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It's a story about Elliot Anderson. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During the day he a normal employe of the company. During the day he is a normal employee of This is the first time you've mentioned the company, so "a company" is more natural than "the company". |
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But night Elliot hacks various crimanls. But at night, Elliot hacks various crimina |
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He dreaming about world revolution and destroying big companys. He dream "Company" is an irregular noun. The plural form is "companies". |
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He also suffers from social phobia and talking with himself. He also suffers from social phobia and talk (1) Social phobia is more commonly known as social anxiety. (2) I think "talks to" is more natural here. "Talks with" might be used in situations where there is more than one person. |
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One day Elliot bacomes member of a haker group. One day Elliot b You can merge this sentence with the one below. |
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The purpose of which destroy "E Corp"(E Corp biggest corporation in the world Mr.Robot).
You don't need quotation marks around company names. |
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First season was beautiful.
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Intresting characters and plot, riddles, paranoid atmosphere. Interesting characters and plot, riddles, and a paranoid atmosphere. |
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But then something happeneds. But then something happened |
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Second season mostly slowly.
"Slowly" is an adverb, used to describe an action. The adjective is "slow". |
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Sometimes characters doing ilogical things, many empty conversation. Sometimes characters d |
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But this seasons has realy god series, who can surprised viewer. [But this seasons has realy god series, who can surprised viewer.]? I'm not too sure about what you meant to convey here. If you can provide me the native text in Ukrainian, I can help you further. |
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Thirdy season. Third |
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Atmosphere fisrt season gone, also logic.
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The plot continues moving because it needs writer. The plot continues moving because it needs a writer. I'm not too sure how the plot needing a writer causes it to continue moving forward. |
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Elliot`s story could ended many times if not deus ex machina. Elliot |
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Fourth season. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The grand final this epic story. The grand finale in this epic story. |
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All season feels like young adult. All the seasons fe I'm not 100% sure what you meant by this sentence, but I took my best guess at it. |
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Many "characters function", stupid plot twist, stupid logic main antagonist. Many I'm not too sure what you meant by "character function", but I again took my best guess. Are you trying to say that many characters had no real function in the plot? |
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In general season feeling like warm up before something bigger.
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The real problems are just begining. The real problems are just beginning. |
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The show lost it's character. The show lost it |
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