June 19, 2025
Gap year is a period where students take a break of -usually- one year. It often involves doing activities such as travelling, interchanging, volunteering, etc.
But why is this debt? Well, elderly people say that it is a waste of time. For them, doing the previous things is like doing “nothing”. Usually, in their times they had to decide quickly whether to study or work. In their opinion, teenagers study 11 years to prepare themselves to the moment of the decision. For example, I am doing eleven grade and people are usually asking me what I will study. I have three options. On the contrary, I understand it is difficult for some people to know themselves perfectly. This is because school does not prepare us for real life.
In mi opinion, the gap year depends of the situation but is useful to explore ourself and decide our lives. We should do something at least we love.
Should students have a gap year before starting university?
GA gap year is a period wheren students take a break of -usually- one year.
It often involves doing activities such as travelling, interchanging, volunteering, etc.
But why is this debt?
Well, elderly people say that it is a waste of time.
For them, doing the previous things is like doing “nothing”.
Usually, in their times they had to decide quickly whether to study or work.
In their opinion, teenagers study 11 years to prepare themselves tofor the moment of the decision.
For example, I am doing grade eleven grade and people are usuallyoften asking me what I will studyant to study after high school.
or "the eleventh grade"
I have three options.
On the contrary, I understand it is difficult for some people to know themselves perfectly.
I took it out because it was unclear what was "contrary." Was it elderly people's beliefs? A different transition word might be better here.
This is because school does not prepare us for real life.
In miy opinion, thewhether or not to take a gap year depends ofn the situation but is useful to explore ourself and decideves before deciding on the direction of our lives.
We should at least do something at leasthat we love.
Should students havtake a gap year before starting university?
GA gap year is a period of time where students take a break, of -usually- of one year.
It often involves doing activities such as travelling, interchanging programs, volunteering, etc.
But why is this debtated?
For them, doing the previous things lis liketed above is the same as doing “nothing”.
Usually, iIn their times, they had to decide quickly decide whether to study or work.
In their opinion, teenagers study for 11 years to prepare themselves to the moment ofmake theis decision.
Can also say "...to prepare themselves for this moment they need to decide."
For example, I am doing eleventh grade and people afre usualquently asking me what I will study.
Frequently means a lot, while usually means often
In miy opinion, theaking a gap year depends ofn the situation buof a person but it is useful to explore ourneself and decide what we want to do with our lives.
We should at least do something at least we love.
Feedback
Good job, keep going :)
Should students have a gap year before starting university? Should students This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Gap year is a period where students take a break of -usually- one year.
|
But why is this debt? But why is this deb This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It often involves doing activities such as travelling, interchanging, volunteering, etc. It often involves doing activities such as travelling, interchanging programs, volunteering, etc. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Well, elderly people say that it is a waste of time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
For them, doing the previous things is like doing “nothing”. For them, doing the This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Usually, in their times they had to decide quickly whether to study or work.
This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
In their opinion, teenagers study 11 years to prepare themselves to the moment of the decision. In their opinion, teenagers study for 11 years to prepare themselves to Can also say "...to prepare themselves for this moment they need to decide." In their opinion, teenagers study 11 years to prepare themselves |
For example, I am doing eleven grade and people are usually asking me what I will study. For example, I am Frequently means a lot, while usually means often For example, I am doing grade eleven or "the eleventh grade" |
I have three options. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
On the contrary, I understand it is difficult for some people to know themselves perfectly.
I took it out because it was unclear what was "contrary." Was it elderly people's beliefs? A different transition word might be better here. |
This is because school does not prepare us for real life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
In mi opinion, the gap year depends of the situation but is useful to explore ourself and decide our lives. In m In m |
We should do something at least we love. We should at least do something We should at least do something |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium