Oct. 30, 2025
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Finally, I wrote my topics based on Instagram as you can see. So yeah I think people should use social media assessing all the risks. Because for now we have to much hackers.
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So yeah I think people should use social media assessing all the risks.
Because for now we have to much hackers.I don’t understand
It's little bit hard to find topics to write there.
If you are referring to this website (Lang Correct), you would use "here" instead of "there", almost like you refer to this website as a place.
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In English we use "followers" instead of "subscribers" on Instagram.
So I use social media like as album i. It's good.
Secondly, I don't understand some content of the influencers' content.
You could also say "content of the influencers" however influencers' content is more common.
But I don't know why everyone is trying to sell me courses, life hacks, financial services , freelance.
Finally, I wrote my topics based on Instagram, as you can see.
So yeah, I think people should use social media assessing all the risks.
Because for now we have too muchany hackers.
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So I asked my friend, and she gave me an idea.
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This is a bit unclear. What is supposed to be for someone's company?
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So yeah I think people should use social media while assessing all the risks.
Because for now we have too muchany hackers.
Should people share everything on social media?
It's a little bit hard to find topics to write there.
So I asked my friend, and she gave me an idea.
Its grammatically correct but adding "and" makes it flow better and sound more natural.
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"first of all" is also grammatically correct, but "firstly" flows better. "Photographs" is the correct spelling, but sounds too formal, so "photos" is more casual.
Because I wanna show my subscribers (most of themare my friends) how I see the world or myself.
"most of them my friends" requires a comma after "them," or a preposition like "most of them are my friends", but it sounds clunky, so "most are my friends" just sounds more natural.
So its good to use social media like asn album it's good.
grammar is just a bit off here, but I get the sentiment :)
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Phrasing is just a bit odd and can be confusing.
Alright, I see you want me to advertise your brand, your name or something.
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Overall, good! I understood everything you meant, the grammar was just slightly wrong at some parts and it sounded a little clunky :)
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So I asked my friend, she gave me an idea. So I asked my friend, and she gave me an idea. Its grammatically correct but adding "and" makes it flow better and sound more natural. So I asked my friend, and she gave me an idea.
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First of all, I really like to post fotographs on Instagram. First "first of all" is also grammatically correct, but "firstly" flows better. "Photographs" is the correct spelling, but sounds too formal, so "photos" is more casual. First of all, I really like to post Spelling "photographs" in full is considered pretty formal these days, it's much more common to just see "photos" First of all, I really like to post |
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Because I wanna show my subscribers (most of them my friends) how I see the world or myself. Because I wanna show my subscribers (most "most of them my friends" requires a comma after "them," or a preposition like "most of them are my friends", but it sounds clunky, so "most are my friends" just sounds more natural. Because I wanna show my In English we use "followers" instead of "subscribers" on Instagram. Because I wan |
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So use social media like as album it's good. So its good to use social media like a grammar is just a bit off here, but I get the sentiment :) So to use social media So I use social media like as album
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Secondly, I don't understand some content of the influencers. Secondly, I don't understand some Secondly, I don't understand some content Secondly, I don't understand some You could also say "content of the influencers" however influencers' content is more common. Secondly, I don't understand some of the content of |
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For your company?
Phrasing is just a bit odd and can be confusing. For your company? This is a bit unclear. What is supposed to be for someone's company?
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Alright I see you want me to advertise your brand, name or something. Alright, I see you want me to advertise your brand, your name or something. Alright I see you want me to advertise your brand, name or something.
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Finally, I wrote my topics based on Instagram as you can see.
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So yeah I think people should use social media assessing all the risks. So yeah, I think people So yeah I think people should use social media while assessing all the risks. So yeah, I think people should use social media assessing all the risks.
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