A Short mMystery sStory

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, etc., must be capitalized.

Hello, so I wrote a short mystery story, which was basically for school, but I finally didn't usedidn't end up using it, soand I would like that someone to read and correct it.

I know it's very long, and it can be a bit boring as I was pretty restricted forin terms of the storyline but please, if you have a bit of time, I would be extremely grateful if you could read and correct this.

If you don't want to correct this asbecause it's toso long, then I would simply appreciate simple feedback ofn the story or any writing advices.

Also, cwould anyone approximatelyit be possible for anyone to guess my English level withusing this text ?

I know it's hard to guess a language level just withperson's level in a language with just one simple text, so if you can't, don't worry, but it would help me a lot.

I just think I have more'm higher than the A1 level.

I know I'm asking for a lot of things and I kind of feel bad for that, but I'm really motivated to learn English, so even the smallest bit of help would be appreciated.

Thank you in advance for your time and consideration :).

‘-"You’re Sadie, Jack’s best friend, right ?’?", asked the detective.

‘-"Yes, I am.’" answered Sadie.

"I am" is often said/written as "I'm".

‘-"Perfect.

So, I briefly heard about what happened last night., but would yo mind explain the story in detail?"

I combined the following sentence with this one because it makes them sound more natural.

Would you mind explaining the story in detail ?

-"Sure.

Luke is aone of Jack's best friend of Jacks.

It was a bit awkward, as I had never seen him before.

"I had" is often said/written as "I'd".

Jack is very rich, m. Maybe you have already seen his house, i? It’s just huge.

Besides, hHe has one cook and two servants just for himself.!

This formatting seems to work better with the tone of the sentence.

So, Jack, Luke, and I were talking in the kitchen while eating dinner.

From the inside of the house, we could hear the loud noise of the lapping rain hitting the ground, and we could see big, scary, but impressive flashes appearing in the sky through the window.

We started talking, and he told me he had met Jack just recently met Jack.

I said at my turn that Jack was a friend from my childhood, but that he was'd becominge a bit weird these times.

I frowned, because I am supposed to know him better, but I decided to not worry about it that much about it.

"I am" is often said/written as "I'm".

When I asked Luke what we should do, he said ‘, "Stay here, I’ll go look for him.".

I’ll go look for him.’ I didn’t want to stay there alone, but as Luke insisted, I finally let him go.

I waited, for more than 30 minutes.

I decided to go out ofleave the kitchen and go outside to search for them.

After walking just a few steps, I noticed that there were blood marksstreaks of blood on the ground.

Slowly, I got closer to the body and realized that it was my best friend Jack was actually, laying on the floor, and covered with blood.

I continued to scream louder and louder, but in vain.

I tThen I decided to call the police.

And they came and stayed for about an hour.

I asked them how their research was dgoing, and they just answered me that they had found meds in his bedroom.

But they still haven’'t found the murderer yet.

That’s why I decided to reach out to you."

-"Well thank you, that was an interesting case".

-"What do you mean by “'that was” ?'?"

-"Oh, I just foundigured out who was the murderer.’ H", he said calmly.

‘-"Really ?"

-"Isn’t it obvious ?

Luke killed your best friend."

-"But that’s not…"

-"Well, finddiscovering murderers is my job.

So, who's opinion should we trust ?’more?"

Sadie didn’t know whathow to answer.