May 7, 2026
Spinning ride
Yesterday was a great day. My friend and I caught up, and then we went for a stroll. We stumbled upon a small amusement park in our area and decided to try the ''spinning ride'' out. It was so much fun! Neither of us had been to amusement parks since our childhoold, so we almost forgot that feeling of light dizziness accompanied by a surge of adrenaline. Now, we are thinking about going to a significantly bigger amusement park at the other side of Moscow and spend our whole day there.
After the ride, we bought some ice cream and went on enjoying the sunny weather at the adjoining park. There, exquisite cherry trees and tulips were blooming. It was a really peaceful afternoon.
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Neither of us had been to amusement parks since our childhoold, so we had almost forgotten that feeling of light dizziness accompanied by a surge of adrenaline.
Neither of us had been to amusement parks since our childhood, so we had almost forgotten that feeling of light dizziness accompanied by a surge of adrenaline.
To me, it feels literary to refer to one's childhood as "our childhood." I would probably say, "Neither of us had been to an amusement park since we were kids, so we had almost forgotten..." but casual or colloquial isn't necessarily better, and literary may be the feeling you want.
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Really nice description; you recreate the day very well.
May 8, 2026
Noted! Thanks.
Spinning ride
Yesterday was a great day.
My friend and I caught up, and then we went for a stroll.
We stumbled upon a small amusement park in our area and decided to try the ''spinning ride'' out.
It was so much fun!
Neither of us had been to an amusement parks since our childhoold, so we had almost forgotten that feeling of light dizziness accompanied by a surge of adrenaline.
Neither of us had been to an amusement park since our childhood, so we had almost forgotten that feeling of light dizziness accompanied by a surge of adrenaline.
Saying "... we almost forgot..." sounds like in that moment, as you were presumably on the "spinning ride", you almost forgot about the feeling of light dizziness and the adrenaline. Since it seems from the context that instead you had more generally almost forgotten about that sensation, but being on the ride reminded you of it, you should say "... we had almost forgotten..."
Now, we are thinking about going to a significantly bigger amusement park aton the other side of Moscow and spending our whole day there.
Now, we are thinking about going to a significantly bigger amusement park on the other side of Moscow and spending our whole day there.
After the ride, we bought some ice cream and went on enjoying the sunny weather at the adjoining park.
There, exquisite cherry trees and tulips were blooming.
It was a really peaceful afternoon.
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Sounds like a fun day!
May 7, 2026
It was!
Thanks for your help, festgep!
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We stumbled upon a small amusement park in our area and decided to try the ''spinning ride'' out. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Neither of us had been to amusement parks since our childhoold, so we almost forgot that feeling of light dizziness accompanied by a surge of adrenaline.
Neither of us had been to an amusement park Saying "... we almost forgot..." sounds like in that moment, as you were presumably on the "spinning ride", you almost forgot about the feeling of light dizziness and the adrenaline. Since it seems from the context that instead you had more generally almost forgotten about that sensation, but being on the ride reminded you of it, you should say "... we had almost forgotten..."
Neither of us had been to amusement parks since our childhoo To me, it feels literary to refer to one's childhood as "our childhood." I would probably say, "Neither of us had been to an amusement park since we were kids, so we had almost forgotten..." but casual or colloquial isn't necessarily better, and literary may be the feeling you want. |
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It was a really peaceful afternoon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My friend and I caught up, and then we went for a stroll. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now, we are thinking about going to a significantly bigger amusement park at the other side of Moscow and spend our whole day there.
Now, we are thinking about going to a significantly bigger amusement park |
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After the ride, we bought some ice cream and went on enjoying the sunny weather at the ajoining park. |
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There, exquisite cherry trees and tulips were blooming. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My friend and I caught up and then went for a stroll. |
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After the ride, we bought some ice cream and went on enjoying the sunny weather at the adjoining park. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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