Sharing mMy tThoughts on Today's Day: How iIt wWent for mMe

"Today's day" sounds very bizarre. "Today" itself is already a day, so you should say it on its own.

Also, this is a title, so I've capitalized the first letter of some of these words. There is more than one way of capitalizing titles, but the way I use is to capitalize every word EXCEPT conjunctions that are very short – about four letters or less.

Today's day is was a very wonderful experience for me (firstly?).

I've changed "is" to "was", since you are talking about events in a day that have already passed. You could also say "Today has been a very wonderful experience [so far]".


Also, "[subject] is [noun]" without any articles sounds very odd in English. In this sentence, what immediately follows "Today was" is an adjective: "very wonderful...". If it were just an adjective, we'd leave out "a" or "the". Example: "Today was very wonderful for me".

However, the adjective "very wonderful" is describing the noun after it, "experience", not the noun "Today" before it. So we use an article: "a", "the", "this", "that", etc. In this case, we are talking about one thing, and it's not a particular or unique thing, so we use "a". "Today was a very wonderful experience".


I'm a little bit confused by the use of "firstly". First of all, it would probably be more natural at the beginning of the sentence, rather than the end. But second of all, "firstly" (or "first of all") means that you want to say a list of things. What I've written just now is actually an example of that already.

I watched my favorite actor's movie, which released today.

"actor" and "movie" are two different nouns. You might see two nouns put together as is, but this is usually because the first noun is treated like an adjective instead (this is often called a "compound word"). In this case, it would refer to the general idea of that thing, rather than a specific one. For example, an "action book" is a book with a plot that has a lot of action, in general. A "book store" is a store which sells books, in general. "My phone charger" is a charger I own which charges phones, in general. But, "my phone's charger" is a charger that charges a specific phone: my phone.

These two nouns, however, feel odd just being put together like this, because "my favorite actor" is a SPECIFIC actor, not just the idea of an actor in general. Because of this, we should use a possessive: "my favorite actor's movie".
"My favorite actor movie"... maybe implies a movie that is about the life of an actor? There isn't really such a thing as an "actor movie".


"I watched my favorite actor's movie" and "released today" should have a comma and then a conjunction between them. In this case, I've used "which", since we are talking about ANOTHER aspect of "my favorite actor's movie". That is, it released today.

I enjoyed myself the most, vibing with the audience aroundin the theatre's atmosphere.

"enjoy" needs something that is being enjoyed. "I enjoyed my morning coffee", or "I enjoyed this movie", etc. If there's no particular object that is being enjoyed, we instead use a "-self" word like "myself" or "yourself". In this context, you could also say you enjoyed the movie, or simply "it" (referring to the movie).

"around" carries with it a sense of movement or rotation that I don't think you mean.

Yet again, the nouns "theatre" and "atmosphere" feel odd put together like this, so I've used another possessive "'s", since it is the atmosphere OF this specific theatre. You could leave it out, but this will be less specific and simply mean "the atmosphere of theatres in general".

Sharing mMy tThoughts on How Today's Day How it w Went for mMe

Today's day is was a very wonderful experience for me firstly.

"Today's day" is redundant; you can just say "Today."

I watched my favorite actor, who was in a movie that released today.

These are two separate thoughts, so break them up into their own clauses.

I enjoyed the most, vibing with the audience aroundin the theatre atmosphereer the most.