July 5, 2021
Sentences 16 – 18
1. This article was meant not so much to represent the development process of Internet technology but rather to provide a perspective on the future application of 5G.
2. It may come as a shock to many people to learn that coffee does not increase the risk of cancer, but too hot a temperature may - because too hot a water temperature can scald the mouth.
3. An argument that is convincing only if it is precise loses all its force if the assumptions on which it is based are slightly changed.
Sentences 16 – 18
1. This article was meant not so much to represent the development process of Internet technology but rather to provide a perspective on the future application of 5G.
This sentence is not wrong, you could also remove "process" and it would still have the same meaning and is more concise:
This article was meant not so much to represent the development of Internet technology but rather to provide a perspective on the future application of 5G.
2. It may come as a shock to many people to learn that coffee does not increase the risk of cancer, but too hot a temperature may - because too hot a waterliquid temperature can scald the mouth.
liquid may be more suitable here since you were talking about coffee at first
3. An argument that is convincing only if it is precise loses all its force if the assumptions on which it is based are slightly changed.
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These sentences are very advanced, good job.
July 7, 2021
Thanks :)
Sentences 16 – 18
1. This article was meant not so much to represent the development process of Internet technology but rather to provide a perspective on the future application of 5G.
2. It may come as a shock to many people to learn that coffee does not increase the risk of cancer, but too hot a temperature may - because too hot a water temperature can scald the mouth.
3. An argument that is convincing only if it is precise loses all its force if the assumptions on which it is based are slightly changed.
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1. This article was meant not so much to represent the development process of Internet technology but rather to provide a perspective on the future application of 5G. This sentence has been marked as perfect! 1. This article was meant not so much to represent the development process of Internet technology but rather to provide a perspective on the future application of 5G. This sentence is not wrong, you could also remove "process" and it would still have the same meaning and is more concise: This article was meant not so much to represent the development of Internet technology but rather to provide a perspective on the future application of 5G. |
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2. It may come as a shock to many people to learn that coffee does not increase the risk of cancer, but too hot a temperature may - because too hot a water temperature can scald the mouth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! 2. It may come as a shock to many people to learn that coffee does not increase the risk of cancer, but too hot a temperature may - because too hot a liquid may be more suitable here since you were talking about coffee at first |
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3. An argument that is convincing only if it is precise loses all its force if the assumptions on which it is based are slightly changed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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