June 10, 2021
Sentences 135: Hamper, shattered, blip
Ambulence was massively hampered in getting to the injured person due to curious by-standers.
My colleague did not show up at work today, because she's shattered by an all-nighter that got ordered by her boss.
Our website traffic is down by 200% but I hope it's a just a blip and we're back to normal tomorrow.
Sentences 135: Hamper, shattered, blip
AThe ambuleance was massivseverely hampered in getting to the injured person due to curious by-standers.
My colleague did not show up ato work today, because she's got shattered by an all-nighter that got ordered by her bossher boss put her through.
Using "shattered" on a person feels weird to me. Shatter is usually used when objects made of glass, porcelain, etc. break into many pieces.
Our website's traffic iswent down by 200% but I hope it's a just a blip and we're back to normal tomorrow.
How is it possible for your traffic to go down by 200%? Wouldn't that mean your traffic is negative? Or am I missing something?
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Ambulence was massively hampered in getting to the injured person due to curious by-standers.
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My colleague did not show up at work today, because she's shattered by an all-nighter that got ordered by her boss. My colleague did not show up Using "shattered" on a person feels weird to me. Shatter is usually used when objects made of glass, porcelain, etc. break into many pieces. |
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Our website traffic is down by 200% but I hope it's a just a blip and we're back to normal tomorrow. Our website's traffic How is it possible for your traffic to go down by 200%? Wouldn't that mean your traffic is negative? Or am I missing something? |
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