April 13, 2025
Second posts
Hello!
This is the second post of my diary.
Now, I am in the cafe and having coffee.
The cafe which I am in is very quiet and can forcus on my works.
I will be here for more 2 hours.
こんにちは!
これは2回目の日記の投稿です。
今、カフェにいてコーヒーを飲んでいます。
私がいるカフェは静かで私の仕事に集中できます。
あと2時間ここにいる予定です。
Second pPosts
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(or: This is my second/2nd diary entry.)
NRight now, I am in thea cafe and having coffee.
The cafe which I am in is very quiet, and I can forcus on my works.
I will be here for 2 more 2 hours.
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Well done!
Hello!
This is the second post of my diary.
Now, I am in the cafe and having coffee.
The cafe which I am in is very quiet and I can forcus on my works.
I will be here for 2 more 2 hours.
April 13, 2025
Thank you very much for correcting my English.
NRight now, I am in thea cafe and having a coffee.
As you're not talking about a specific cafe "a cafe" is better than "the cafe".
The cafe which I am in is very quiet and I can forcus on my works.
Now you're telling me more about the cafe introduced in the previous sentence, so "the cafe" is correct.
Work is used here as the broad concept of all the things you're doing while at the cafe. So you don't need to pluralise the word.
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Good luck with your work!
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