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A science magazine called "Newton" is very famous in both Korea and Japan.

I had subscribed a science manazine when I was a high school student.

There was no enough space to store in my room, so I cancelled the subscription when I was in college.

With my son's help, I find out that the magazine is now published in e-book.

I buy it right after that, and now I am reading it.

It is still interested for me.

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A science magazine called "Newton" is very famous in both Korea and Japan.

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Dec. 14, 2021

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A science magazine called "Newton" is very famous in both Korea and Japan.


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I had subscribed a science manazine when I was a high school student.


I had a subscribedption to a science manazine when I was a high school student. I had a subscription to a science manazine when I was a high school student.

You could also write here "I was subscribed to".

There was no enough space to store in my room, so I cancelled the subscription when I was in college.


There was no enough space to store it in my room, so I cancelled the subscription when I was in college. There was no enough space to store it in my room, so I cancelled the subscription when I was in college.

With my son's help, I find out that the magazine is now published in e-book.


With my son's help, I fiound out that the magazine is now published ias an e-book. With my son's help, I found out that the magazine is now published as an e-book.

When saying that something is being published in some form/format, you say "as a(n) ..." usually.

I buy it right after that, and now I am reading it.


I buyought it right after thatwards, and now I am reading it. I bought it right afterwards, and now I am reading it.

"after that" isn't wrong, it just sounds a bit off, this is more natural when talking about events that happened a while ago.

It is still interested for me.


It is still just as interesteding for me. It is still just as interesting for me.

I added "just as" because I think you wre trying to say you still found it as interesting as you did before.

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