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kiwy

July 14, 2021

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Recently, I am reading an erotic article. The man actor runs everyday, so he is in good body shape. And there is a girl always goes running, she looks good, too.
I know there are many advantags of running, I don't like it, but I don't hate it either. I ran occasionally recent years. I like swimming most. Since I live in a small town without swimming pool, and it's too inconvenient to go to the pool, so I decide to run again.
I went running tonight. My goal is 2km. Yep, it was so short. Once I ran 3 km at least. But I hadn'r run for a long time, 2 km was even a little hard for me. I asked a friend, who loves running and is wild about marathon to run with me. Because I was afraid that I could'n fininsh my 2km-running alone, I needed someone to guide me. Finally, I managed to hit my goal.
Marathon was popular a few years ago, especially among the white collars and the enterprisers. I sighed up a game for a 5km-running once, but I was too busy to attend. From then on, I never registerd any more.
There was also a book popular in the same time, which was written by the Japanese author Murakami Haruki. Its name is " What am I thinking about when I am running". I haven't finished reading the book for a long time. But when I was running, I always thought of it, every time. Then I would smile. It was like a joke or something amusing.
So what was I thinking about when I was running tonight? Well, I was thinking about "what am I thinking about when I am running."

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Running

Recently, I am reading an erotic an article.

I don’t know what you are trying to say here. Erotic means explicitly/graphically sexual.

The man actor runs everyday, so he is in good body shape.

And there is a girl always goes running, sone girl runs also. She looks good, too.

I know there are many advantags of running, I don't like it, but I don't hate it either.

In recent years I ran occasionally recent years.

I like swimming mostre.

You could also say “I like swimming the most”

Since I live in a small town without a swimming pool, and it's too inconvenient to go to the pool, so I decided to run again.

I went running tonight.

My goal is 2km.

Yep, it was so short.

Once I ran 3 km at least 3 km.

But I hadn'r t run for a long time, so even 2 km was even a little hard for me.

I asked a friend, who loves running and is wild about running marathons to run with me.

Because I was afraid that I could'nt fininsh my 2km-running alone, Iand needed someone to guide me.

Finally, I managed to hit my goal.

Marathoning was popular a few years ago, especially among the white collars and the enterprise workers and entrepreneurs.

I sighed up a game for a 5km-running race once, but I was too busy to attendgo.

Attend is usually used for classes.

From then on, I never registered any moregain.

There was also a book popular inat the same time, which was written by the Japanese author Murakami Haruki.

Its name is " What am I thinking about when I am running".

I haven't finished reading the book forin a long time.

But when I was running, I always thought of it, every time.

Then I would smile.

It was like a joke or something amusing.

So what was I thinking about when I was running tonight?

Well, I was thinking about "what am I thinking about when I am running."

Recently, I am've been reading an erotic article.

The main actor runs everyday, so he is in good body shape.

And tThere is also a girl who always goes running, s. She looks good, too.

I know there are many advantages tof running,. I don't like it, but I don't hate it either.

I ran occasionally in recent years.

But I like swimming most.

Since I live in a small town without a swimming pool, and it's too inconvenient to go to the pool, so II have decided to runtry running again.

I went running tonight.

My goal is 2km.

Yep, it was so short.

OncThere was one time I ran 3 km at least.

But I hadn'rt ruan for a long time, so even 2 km was even a little hard for me.

I asked a friend, who loves running and is wild about convincing me to run a marathon to run with meher.

Because I was afraid that I could'n't fininsh my 2km- running alone, I needed someone to guide me.

Finally, I managed to hit my goal.

MRunning marathons was popular a few years ago, especially among the white collars and the enterpriseworks and entrepreneurs.

I sighned up a game for a 5km- running once, but unfortunately I was too busy to attend.

From then on, I never registerded for another run any more.

There was also a book popular during the same time, which was written by the Japanese author Murakami Haruki.

ItsThe name is " What am I thinking about when I am running".

I haven't finished reading the book again for a long time.

But when I was running, I always thought of it, every time.

Then I would smile.

It was like a joke or something amusing.

So what was I thinking about when I was running tonight?

Well, I was thinking about "what am I thinking about when I am running."

Running

Recently, I am reading an erotic article.

Grammatically this is fine, but I'm not sure if "erotic" is really what you want? This means that you're reading a very sexual article, an article intended to make the reader sexually excited. If that is what you mean, in English we'd probably call it a "romance novel" or a "romantic serial", something like that - we're shy :)

The manle actor runs every day, so he is in good body shape.

"man actor" is okay but sounds a bit awkward.

And there is a girl who always goes running, she looks good, too.

I know there are many advantages of running, but I don't like it, but. Although I don't hate it either.

"although" is just another way of saying "but" so that you don't have to repeat yourself. You needed a conjunction between the first two ideas, they contrast too much to simply use a comma.

I ran occasionally in recent years.

More natural: "I've run occasionally in the past few years."

I like swimming most.

Since I live in a small town without a swimming pool, and it's too inconvenient to go to the pool, so II've decided to run again.

"Since" and "so" were both doing the same thing - each of them is in the correct place for the correct reason, but you only need one of them.

Simple present tense isn't good here. You could've used simple past "I decided", but present perfect "I have decided" is most natural, because it's a past decision with present consequences. In the past, you decided, but because of that past decision, you are presently in a routine of going running.

I went running tonight.

My goal is 2km.

Yep, it was so short.

Once I ran 3 km at least.

But I hadn'rt run for a long time, even 2 km was even a little hard for me.

It sounds better this way round, but I'm not sure exactly why.

I asked a friend, who loves running and is wild about marathons, to run with me.

This would actually work without any commas at all, but once you started off the parenthetic clause with the first comma, you needed another comma to finish it before continuing the sentence.

Because I was afraid that I could'n't fininsh my 2 km- running alone, I needed someone to guide me.

could not -> couldnot -> couldn't

Finally, I managed to hit my goal.

Marathon running was popular a few years ago, especially among the white collars and the enterprise workers and entrepeneurs.

Or "Marathons were". Singular "marathon" almost always refers to a single marathon event. He ran a marathon yesterday. They will be having a marathon in town next weekend.

I sighned up a game for a 5 km- running competition once, but I was too busy to attend.

From then on, I never registered any more.

More natural: "I never registered again".

There was also a book popular inat the same time, which was written by the Japanese author Murakami Haruki.

The English convention is to say Haruki Murakami. Of course this isn't wrong, but just to note :)

"in" is okay but "at" sounds much better here.

Its name is " What am I tI Am Thinking aAbout wWhen I aAm rRunning".

Convention is to capitalise the first letter of each word in a book title. "What am I thinking about" is the word order for asking questions.

This may just be a quirk of translation, but English sources give the title as "What I Talk About When I Talk About Running" :)

I haven't finished reading the book for a long time.

"I haven't finished reading it" is what you would say if you *are currently* reading it, but you have not finished yet. Or if you gave up, and never finished.

But when I was running, I always thought of it, every time.

Then I would smile.

It was like a joke or something amusing.

So what was I thinking about when I was running tonight?

Well, I was thinking about "what I am I thinking about when I am running."

You should probably do title capitalisation here too, but I'd say it's up to you :)

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Next time I go running I'll try and remember to think about you thinking about "what I am thinking about when I am running" when you are running!

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kiwy

July 14, 2021

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Recently, I am reading an erotic article.

23333~I got it. I know the genre or key word now.
In Chinese, we call it "小黄文"(little yellow article). Yellow means erotic and sexual. There is propaganda of "打黄扫非", which is to contral prostitution.

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kiwy

July 14, 2021

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You are so adorable. I will go running tomorrow!!

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secretpostman

July 14, 2021

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Little yellow - I like that :) Good luck!

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Recently, I am reading an erotic article.


Recently, I am reading an erotic article.

Grammatically this is fine, but I'm not sure if "erotic" is really what you want? This means that you're reading a very sexual article, an article intended to make the reader sexually excited. If that is what you mean, in English we'd probably call it a "romance novel" or a "romantic serial", something like that - we're shy :)

Recently, I am've been reading an erotic article.

Recently, I am reading an erotic an article.

I don’t know what you are trying to say here. Erotic means explicitly/graphically sexual.

The man actor runs everyday, so he is in good body shape.


The manle actor runs every day, so he is in good body shape.

"man actor" is okay but sounds a bit awkward.

The main actor runs everyday, so he is in good body shape.

The man actor runs everyday, so he is in good body shape.

And there is a girl always goes running, she looks good, too.


And there is a girl who always goes running, she looks good, too.

And tThere is also a girl who always goes running, s. She looks good, too.

And there is a girl always goes running, sone girl runs also. She looks good, too.

I know there are many advantags of running, I don't like it, but I don't hate it either.


I know there are many advantages of running, but I don't like it, but. Although I don't hate it either.

"although" is just another way of saying "but" so that you don't have to repeat yourself. You needed a conjunction between the first two ideas, they contrast too much to simply use a comma.

I know there are many advantages tof running,. I don't like it, but I don't hate it either.

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I ran occasionally recent years.


I ran occasionally in recent years.

More natural: "I've run occasionally in the past few years."

I ran occasionally in recent years.

In recent years I ran occasionally recent years.

I like swimming most.


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But I like swimming most.

I like swimming mostre.

You could also say “I like swimming the most”

Since I live in a small town without swimming pool, and it's too inconvenient to go to the pool, so I decide to run again.


Since I live in a small town without a swimming pool, and it's too inconvenient to go to the pool, so II've decided to run again.

"Since" and "so" were both doing the same thing - each of them is in the correct place for the correct reason, but you only need one of them. Simple present tense isn't good here. You could've used simple past "I decided", but present perfect "I have decided" is most natural, because it's a past decision with present consequences. In the past, you decided, but because of that past decision, you are presently in a routine of going running.

Since I live in a small town without a swimming pool, and it's too inconvenient to go to the pool, so II have decided to runtry running again.

Since I live in a small town without a swimming pool, and it's too inconvenient to go to the pool, so I decided to run again.

I went running tonight.


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My goal is 2km.


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Yep, it was so short.


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Once I ran 3 km at least.


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OncThere was one time I ran 3 km at least.

Once I ran 3 km at least 3 km.

But I hadn'r run for a long time, 2 km was even a little hard for me.


But I hadn'rt run for a long time, even 2 km was even a little hard for me.

It sounds better this way round, but I'm not sure exactly why.

But I hadn'rt ruan for a long time, so even 2 km was even a little hard for me.

But I hadn'r t run for a long time, so even 2 km was even a little hard for me.

I asked a friend, who loves running and is wild about marathon to run with me.


I asked a friend, who loves running and is wild about marathons, to run with me.

This would actually work without any commas at all, but once you started off the parenthetic clause with the first comma, you needed another comma to finish it before continuing the sentence.

I asked a friend, who loves running and is wild about convincing me to run a marathon to run with meher.

I asked a friend, who loves running and is wild about running marathons to run with me.

Because I was afraid that I could'n fininsh my 2km-running alone, I needed someone to guide me.


Because I was afraid that I could'n't fininsh my 2 km- running alone, I needed someone to guide me.

could not -> couldnot -> couldn't

Because I was afraid that I could'n't fininsh my 2km- running alone, I needed someone to guide me.

Because I was afraid that I could'nt fininsh my 2km-running alone, Iand needed someone to guide me.

Finally, I managed to hit my goal.


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Marathon was popular a few years ago, especially among the white collars and the enterprisers.


Marathon running was popular a few years ago, especially among the white collars and the enterprise workers and entrepeneurs.

Or "Marathons were". Singular "marathon" almost always refers to a single marathon event. He ran a marathon yesterday. They will be having a marathon in town next weekend.

MRunning marathons was popular a few years ago, especially among the white collars and the enterpriseworks and entrepreneurs.

Marathoning was popular a few years ago, especially among the white collars and the enterprise workers and entrepreneurs.

I sighed up a game for a 5km-running once, but I was too busy to attend.


I sighned up a game for a 5 km- running competition once, but I was too busy to attend.

I sighned up a game for a 5km- running once, but unfortunately I was too busy to attend.

I sighed up a game for a 5km-running race once, but I was too busy to attendgo.

Attend is usually used for classes.

From then on, I never registerd any more.


From then on, I never registered any more.

More natural: "I never registered again".

From then on, I never registerded for another run any more.

From then on, I never registered any moregain.

There was also a book popular in the same time, which was written by the Japanese author Murakami Haruki.


There was also a book popular inat the same time, which was written by the Japanese author Murakami Haruki.

The English convention is to say Haruki Murakami. Of course this isn't wrong, but just to note :) "in" is okay but "at" sounds much better here.

There was also a book popular during the same time, which was written by the Japanese author Murakami Haruki.

There was also a book popular inat the same time, which was written by the Japanese author Murakami Haruki.

Its name is " What am I thinking about when I am running".


Its name is " What am I tI Am Thinking aAbout wWhen I aAm rRunning".

Convention is to capitalise the first letter of each word in a book title. "What am I thinking about" is the word order for asking questions. This may just be a quirk of translation, but English sources give the title as "What I Talk About When I Talk About Running" :)

ItsThe name is " What am I thinking about when I am running".

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I haven't finished reading the book for a long time.


I haven't finished reading the book for a long time.

"I haven't finished reading it" is what you would say if you *are currently* reading it, but you have not finished yet. Or if you gave up, and never finished.

I haven't finished reading the book again for a long time.

I haven't finished reading the book forin a long time.

But when I was running, I always thought of it, every time.


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Then I would smile.


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It was like a joke or something amusing.


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So what was I thinking about when I was running tonight?


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Well, I was thinking about "what am I thinking about when I am running."


Well, I was thinking about "what I am I thinking about when I am running."

You should probably do title capitalisation here too, but I'd say it's up to you :)

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