May 10, 2026
Myself.
Hello, my friends！You can call me Elowen.（・∀・）I am a grade-9 student in China.ヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉI have many hobbies such as singing and painting.(/^▽^)/Well, I am a girl so I want to make friends with a girl,too.(☆^ー^☆)I have to improve my English.Can you be my friend?(●´∀｀●)
嗨，朋友们！你们可以叫我Elowen（・∀・）。我是一名来自中国的九年级学生ヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉ。我有很多爱好，比如唱歌和画画(/^▽^)/。嗯，我是个女生，所以也想交一些女性朋友(☆^ー^☆)。我得提高我的英语水平，你们愿意和我做朋友吗？(●´∀｀●)
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About Myself. About Myself.
Or About Me
Hello, my friends！!
Hello, my friends!
No space between punctuations.
You can call me Elowen.
（・∀・） （・∀・）
(◕ᴗ◕✿)
I am a grade-9 student in China.
ヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉ
I have many hobbies such as singing and painting. I have many hobbies such as singing and painting.
Me too, 😄.
(/^▽^)/
Well, I am a girl so I want to make friends with a girl, too. Well, I am a girl so I want to make friends with a girl, too.
(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
(☆^ー^☆)
I have to improve my English.
Can you be my friend? Can you be my friend?
Yes (◠‿◕)
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You are highly welcome 🤗.
MAbout myself.
About myself
Your original title is fine btw, this is just a bit more formal
Hello, my friends！!
Hello, my friends!
I think the Chinese language ! has slightly strange spacing...
You can call me Elowen.
I am a grade- 9 student in China.
I am a grade 9 student in China.
I have many hobbies such as singing and painting.
Well, I am a girl so I want to make friends with a girl, too.
I am a girl so I want to make friends with a girl, too.
You don't really need the 'well' here.
I have to improve my English.
Can you be my friend?
Feedback
The emoji are cute
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Myself.
Your original title is fine btw, this is just a bit more formal About Myself. About Myself. Or About Me |
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Hello, my friends！
Hello, my friends I think the Chinese language ! has slightly strange spacing...
Hello, my friends No space between punctuations. |
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You can call me Elowen. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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（・∀・） （・∀・） （・∀・） (◕ᴗ◕✿) |
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I am a grade-9 student in China.
I am a grade This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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ヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have many hobbies such as singing and painting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I have many hobbies such as singing and painting. I have many hobbies such as singing and painting. Me too, 😄. |
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(/^▽^)/ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Well, I am a girl so I want to make friends with a girl,too.
You don't really need the 'well' here. Well, I am a girl so I want to make friends with a girl, too. Well, I am a girl so I want to make friends with a girl, too. (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.) |
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(☆^ー^☆) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have to improve my English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Can you be my friend? This sentence has been marked as perfect! Can you be my friend? Can you be my friend? Yes (◠‿◕) |
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