May 31, 2025
Amid a continued rice shortage and rising rice prices, the Japanese government finally has taken measures to supply its citizens rice at a reasonable price. Agriculture Minister Koizumi announced that a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (old rice 古米) and the 2022 (older rice 古古米) will be offered for 2000 yen and the 2021(oldest rice 古古古米) will be for 1800 yen. As the current price for 2024 crop (new rice 新米) is more than 4000 yen, the prices of government’s stockpiled rice are surprisingly low. However, everyone knows that old rice, especially 古古古米, is not very delicious, so I wonder if people really will prefer them to much more expensive rice. Also, the ultimate problem is about the future rice prices. After the government’s stockpiled rice has been used up, how will rice prices be controlled? The number of rice farmers is decreasing, and their wages are not enough. The stable supply and price maintenance of rice depend on the government.
高騰する米価
米不足と米価高騰が続く中、日本政府はついに国民に米を適正価格で供給するための対策を講じた。小泉農林水産大臣は、2023年産と2022年産の米5kgを1袋2000円、2021年産の米を1袋1800円で提供すると発表した。現在、2024年産の新米の価格は4000円を超えているため、政府備蓄米の価格は驚くほど低い。しかし、古い米、特に古古米があまり美味しくないことは誰もが知っているため、人々が本当に高価な米よりも古い米を好むかどうかは疑問だ。そして、究極の問題は将来の米価である。政府の備蓄米が使い果たされた後、米価をどうコントロールするのか。稲作農家の数は減少しており、彼らの賃金は十分ではない。米の安定供給と価格維持は政府にかかっている。
Amid a continued rice shortage and rising rice prices, the Japanese government has finally has taken measures to supply its citizens with rice at a reasonable price.
Agriculture Minister Koizumi announced that a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (old rice 古米) and the 2022 harvest (older rice 古古米) will be offered for 2000 yen, and the 2021at the same amount of pounds of rice from the 2021 harvest (oldest rice 古古古米) will be for 1800 yen.
As the current price for the 2024 crop (new rice 新米) is more than 4000 yen, the prices of the government’s stockpiled rice are surprisingly low.
However, everyone knows that old rice, especially 古古古米, is not very delicious, so I wonder if people really will prefer them to rice that's much more expensive rice.
The stable supply and price maintenance of rice depends on the government.
Rising Rice Prices
Amid a continued rice shortage and rising rice prices, the Japanese government finally has taken measures to supply its citizens rice at a reasonable price.
Agricultureal Minister Koizumi announced that a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (old rice 古米) and the 2022 (older rice 古古米) harvests will be offered for 2000 yen and the 2021(. Rice from 2021 (the oldest rice 古古古米) will be for 1800 yen.
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Really great writing! It was interesting to learn about Japan's rice prices, I've been reading about it in NHK easy news. Hopefully the government gets a solution soon
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This sentence does make sense, but it's not natural. This is how I would say it.
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The number of rice farmers is decreasing, and their wages are not enough to live on.
You need to add what it's not enough for.
The stable supply and price maintenance of rice depend on the government.
The stable supply and price maintenance of rice is very government dependent.
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Great work!
Rising Rice Prices
Amid a continued rice shortage and rising rice prices, the Japanese government finally has taken measures to supply its citizens rice at a reasonable price.
Agriculture Minister Koizumi announced that a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (old rice 古米) and the 2022 (older rice 古古米) will be offered for 2000 yen and the 2021(oldest rice 古古古米) will be for 1800 yen.
As the current price for 2024 crop (new rice 新米) is more than 4000 yen for 5 kg, the prices of government’s stockpiled rice are surprisingly low.
ALSO POSSIBLE: However, everyone knows that old rice, especially 古古古米, is not very delicious, so I wonder if people really will prefer them to muchhow many people pay more for the more expensive rice.
Also, the ultimate problem is about the futureMY PREFERENCE: Japan faces an unsolved problem of rising rice prices.
After the government’s stockpiled rice has been used up, how will rice prices be controlled?
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Indeed. Rising food prices are a concern of many living in Japan.
Rising Rice Prices
Amid a continued rice shortage and rising rice prices, the Japanese government finally has taken measures to supply its citizens rice at a reasonable price.
Agriculture Minister Koizumi announced that a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (old rice 古米) and the 2022 (older rice 古古米) will be offered for 2000 yen and the, while that from 2021 (oldest rice 古古古米) will be for 1800 yen.
(1) We don't put "the" directly before year numbers. If we want to use "the", we'd write "the year 2022". If you meant to refer to the 2022 harvest (rather than the year), the reader will be able to understand that, since you'd already written "2023 harvest".
(2) Alternatively, if you insist on specifying that "2022" refers to that year's harvest, repeating the word "harvest" is fine: "a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (...) and 2022 harvest (...)". You could also combine the two: "a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 (...) and 2022 harvests (...)".
(3) I'd suggest both the addition of a comma and replacing "and" with "while", because consecutive use of "and" in a lengthy sentence doesn't make it very easy to read.
As the current price for the 2024 crop (new rice 新米) is more than 4000 yen, the prices of government’s stockpiled rice are surprisingly low.
I think using "the" is more natural, especially because in this context, "crop" represents an amount (crop: an amount of produce harvested at one time). As another example, "the price for 2024 harvest" also sounds unnatural to me, because "harvest" also represents a quantity.
Also, the ultimate problem is about the future rice prices.
After the government’s stockpiled rice has been used up, how will rice prices be controlled?
The number of rice farmers is decreasing, and their wages are not enough.
The stable supply and price maintenance of rice depend on the government.
Agriculture Minister Koizumi announced that a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (old rice 古米) and the 2022 (older rice 古古米) will be offered for 2000 yen and the 2021(oldest rice 古古古米) will be for 1800 yen. Agriculture Minister Koizumi announced that a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (old rice 古米) and (1) We don't put "the" directly before year numbers. If we want to use "the", we'd write "the year 2022". If you meant to refer to the 2022 harvest (rather than the year), the reader will be able to understand that, since you'd already written "2023 harvest". (2) Alternatively, if you insist on specifying that "2022" refers to that year's harvest, repeating the word "harvest" is fine: "a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (...) and 2022 harvest (...)". You could also combine the two: "a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 (...) and 2022 harvests (...)". (3) I'd suggest both the addition of a comma and replacing "and" with "while", because consecutive use of "and" in a lengthy sentence doesn't make it very easy to read. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Agriculture Minister Koizumi announced th This sentence does make sense, but it's not natural. This is how I would say it. Agricultur Agriculture Minister Koizumi announced that a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (old rice 古米) and the 2022 harvest (older rice 古古米) will be offered for 2000 yen, and th |
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Agriculture Minister Koizumi announced that a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (古米) and the 2022 (古古米) will be offered for 2000 yen and the 2021(古古古米) will be for 1800 yen. |
As the current price for 2024 crop (新米) is more than 4000 yen, the prices of government’s stockpiled rice are surprisingly low. |
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The number of rice farmers is decreasing, and their wages are not enough. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The number of rice farmers is decreasing, and their wages are The number of rice farmers is decreasing, and their wages are not enough to live on. You need to add what it's not enough for. The number of rice farmers is decreasing, and their wages are not enough. "and they aren't paid enough" sounds more natural |
The stable supply and price maintenance of rice depend on the government. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
The stable supply and price maintenance of rice depend on the government. The stable supply and price maintenance of rice is very government dependent.
The stable supply and price maintenance of rice depends on the government. |
Agriculture Minister Koizumi announced that a 5kg bag of rice from the 2023 harvest (old rice 古米) and the 2022 (older rice古古米) will be offered for 2000 yen and the 2021(oldest rice古古古米) will be for 1800 yen. |
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