May 24, 2021
Riding by Bicycle around Jeju Island
Ten years ago, my colleage friends and I visited Jeju Island for making our unique memories.
We planned to ride by bicycle around the island where is more than 240 km.
It took a week for many people to ride, but we tried to go around there for only three days.
Of cource, I was very tired by the end of the trip, but I cound have many interesting memories.
I ate horse meat bulgogi for the first time.
I saw shooting stars while I was riding at midnight.
If I will have a chance, I will ride there again.
Riding by Bicycle around Jeju Island
Ten years ago, my colleage friends and I visited Jeju Island for making our unique memorieson a memory-making trip.
We planned to ride by bicycles around the island, whereich is more than 240 km in circumference.
It tookakes a week for manyost people to complete the ride, but we tried to go around there forin only three days.
Of courcse, I was very tired by the end of the trip, but I cound havehad many interesting memories.
I ate horse meat bulgogi for the first time.
I saw shooting stars while I was riding at midnight.
If I willever have athe chance, I will ride there again.
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May 24, 2021
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Ten years ago, my colleage friends and I visited Jeju Island for making our unique memories. Ten years ago, my coll |
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We planned to ride by bicycle around the island where is more than 240 km. We planned to ride |
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It took a week for many people to ride, but we tried to go around there for only three days. It t |
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Of cource, I was very tired by the end of the trip, but I cound have many interesting memories. Of cour |
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I ate horse meat bulgogi for the first time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I saw shooting stars while I was riding at midnight. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If I will have a chance, I will ride there again. If I |
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