I am a woman, I am theirty-one years old, and I am a teacher in primary school, of teacher for kids between the ages of five and seve yearsn. I am a woman, I am thirty-one years old, and I am a primary school teacher for kids between the ages of five and seven.

When making a list in a sentence, the word „and“ should be added after the last comma. Since you’re talking about the ages of the kids you teach, you should add the word „age“ or „years old“ („between the ages of five and seven“ and „between five or seven years old“ would both work since they both specify that you’re talking about their ages). Although it’s true that you’re a „teacher of kids“, it’s more common to use „for“ instead of „of“ since you’re doing something for them (if I was a „doctor of animals“, I would say that I’m a „doctor for animals“ because I’m doing something for them).

I am a woman, and I am theirty-one years old,. I am a teacher in primary school, of kids teacher for children between five and seven years old. I am a woman, and I am thirty-one years old. I am a primary school teacher for children between five and seven years old.

I like my job very much my job because I love the children and tolove seeing how they learning. I like my job very much because I love the children and love seeing how they learn.

„To see how learning“ should include a pronoun to make it clear who you’re talking about. You could say „to see how they’re learning“ if you want to just talk about how they’re learning right now/recently, but if you want to talk about their learning in general/across the whole year, it would be better to use „to see how they learn“.

I like my job very much my job because I love the children and toI enjoy seeing how they learning. I like my job very much because I love children and I enjoy seeing how they learn.