April 6, 2021
Review 2132
The country are much more rigid about immigrants, by strictly dividing them into 2 categories: legal and illegal, a division that has somehow undermined the immigration system. Many talented people prefer immigration to pursuing their calling, which will contribute to the prosperity of immigrant countries. That is why managing immigration today requires multiple paths and multiple outcomes.
Review 2132
TheMy country areis much more rigidfirm about immigrants than it used to be, by strictly dividing them into 2 categories: legal and illegal, a. This division that has somehow undermined the immigration system.
'the country' sounds a bit weird, I would use something like 'my/our country' or the country name.
'rigid' is usually used when talking about the feeling of an object or someone's personality, 'firm' means strict or unlikely to change.
Many talented people prefer immigratione to pursuinge their callingdreams, which will contribute to the prosperity of immigrant countries.
April 6, 2021
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The country are much more rigid about immigrants, by strictly dividing them into 2 categories: legal and illegal, a division that has somehow undermined the immigration system.
'the country' sounds a bit weird, I would use something like 'my/our country' or the country name. 'rigid' is usually used when talking about the feeling of an object or someone's personality, 'firm' means strict or unlikely to change. |
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Many talented people prefer immigration to pursuing their calling, which will contribute to the prosperity of immigrant countries. Many talented people |
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That is why managing immigration today requires multiple paths and multiple outcomes. |
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