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alexwong2164

June 9, 2021

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Retirement Plan

Next year I will turn to 55.

That is retirement age of my job.

Most people including myself thinks that too young to retire.

And request working for few more years is no difficult at all.

But now I am seriously consider my retirement life.

My definition for retirement is kind of negative.

Because I don’t have “jobs” anymore.

Each day I need to think of something to do.

That “something” is the difficult part.

Because no job life means no income life.

I have to live by my own saving money.

Besides the biggest problem will be how to maintain a positive emotion.

Any good advice for me?

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Next year, I will turn to 55.

Thatis is the age of retirement age oft my job.

Most people including myself thinks that that is too young to retire.

But now, I am seriously considering my life after retirement life.

My idefinition fora of retirement is kind of negative.

Each day I need to think of something to do.

That “something” is the difficult part.

I have to live byoff my own saving moneys.

Besides this, the biggest problem will be how to maintain astay positive emotion.

Any good advice for me?

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sobaba

June 10, 2021

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Great work!

Retirement Plan

That is retirement age of my job.

Or: that is the retirement age in my field/industry/etc.

My definiconception ofor retirement is kind of negative.

Each day I need to think of something to do.

That “something” is the difficult part.

Because no job life means no income lifI won't have an income/I won't know what to do with my time.

Not quite sure what you want to say here.

I will have to live by my ownoff of my saving moneys.

Any good advice for me?

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Regarding your question: find a hobby, like language learning, to use during your free time!
Excellent work.

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sobaba

June 10, 2021

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Great work!

Retirement Plan


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Next year I will turn to 55.


Next year, I will turn to 55.

That is retirement age of my job.


That is retirement age of my job.

Or: that is the retirement age in my field/industry/etc.

Thatis is the age of retirement age oft my job.

Most people including myself thinks that too young to retire.


Most people including myself thinks that that is too young to retire.

And request working for few more years is no difficult at all.


But now I am seriously consider my retirement life.


But now, I am seriously considering my life after retirement life.

My definition for retirement is kind of negative.


My definiconception ofor retirement is kind of negative.

My idefinition fora of retirement is kind of negative.

Because I don’t have “jobs” anymore.


Each day I need to think of something to do.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That “something” is the difficult part.


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Because no job life means no income life.


Because no job life means no income lifI won't have an income/I won't know what to do with my time.

Not quite sure what you want to say here.

I have to live by my own saving money.


I will have to live by my ownoff of my saving moneys.

I have to live byoff my own saving moneys.

Besides the biggest problem will be how to maintain a positive emotion.


Besides this, the biggest problem will be how to maintain astay positive emotion.

Any good advice for me?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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