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jenny699

April 19, 2021

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First of all, I had a basic understanding of the "leverage demand management framework" in SAP Technology, and understood how to obtain new customers, and how to consolidate the relationship with customers after obtaining, so as to increase our sales volume.

Secondly, through ESG, I can see how to judge the company's sense of social responsibility. Because governments advocate green finance, companies with ESG departments may develop better, although Pooja also says that there are not many departments in Hong Kong.

Finally, in the Ecoach of Joey, I understood how to integrate management concepts into daily life, and the SLIM model has let me know how to formulate strategic goals and implementation measures, and has analyzed the business environment.

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First of all, I hagained a basic understanding of the "leverage demand management framework" in SAP Technology, and understood how to obtain new customers, and how to consolidate the relationship with customers after obtaining, so as to increase our sales volume.

I'm assuming you're writing a reflection on some sort of text or experience - so use the past perfect, but "I understood" ≠ "I gained an understanding."
"I understood" = just in general, I knew what was going on (didn't learn anything new)
"I gained an understanding" = I didn't understand before, but now I do - I learned something

"To obtain" always takes a direct object

Secondly, through ESG, I can see how to judge the company's sense of social responsibility.

Because governments advocate for green finance, companies with ESG departments may develop better, although Pooja also says that there are not many such departments in Hong Kong.

Finally, in the Ecoach of Joey, I understoolearned how to integrate management concepts into daily life, and t. The SLIM model has let me know howhelped me understand to formulate strategic goals and implementation measures, and has analyzed the business environment.

Alternative: "The SLIM model has taught me..."

"To let someone know" is like "to tell someone." It's almost always a person who's doing the telling - e.g., "let me know if you have any questions."

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Reflectiveon

First of all, I had a basic understanding of the "leverage demand management framework" in SAP Technology, and understood how to obtain new customers, and how to consolidate the relationship with customers after obtaining, so as to increase our sales volume.


First of all, I hagained a basic understanding of the "leverage demand management framework" in SAP Technology, and understood how to obtain new customers, and how to consolidate the relationship with customers after obtaining, so as to increase our sales volume.

I'm assuming you're writing a reflection on some sort of text or experience - so use the past perfect, but "I understood" ≠ "I gained an understanding." "I understood" = just in general, I knew what was going on (didn't learn anything new) "I gained an understanding" = I didn't understand before, but now I do - I learned something "To obtain" always takes a direct object

Secondly, through ESG, I can see how to judge the company's sense of social responsibility.


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Because governments advocate green finance, companies with ESG departments may develop better, although Pooja also says that there are not many departments in Hong Kong.


Because governments advocate for green finance, companies with ESG departments may develop better, although Pooja also says that there are not many such departments in Hong Kong.

Finally, in the Ecoach of Joey, I understood how to integrate management concepts into daily life, and the SLIM model has let me know how to formulate strategic goals and implementation measures, and has analyzed the business environment.


Finally, in the Ecoach of Joey, I understoolearned how to integrate management concepts into daily life, and t. The SLIM model has let me know howhelped me understand to formulate strategic goals and implementation measures, and has analyzed the business environment.

Alternative: "The SLIM model has taught me..." "To let someone know" is like "to tell someone." It's almost always a person who's doing the telling - e.g., "let me know if you have any questions."

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