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Red Hot Chili Peppers

Now It's raining, and I'll go to cook the dinner. In the afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Black beans with salt, chili peppers, paprika, chives, onion and lemon. My family like the black beans. But they don't know that I use a lemon for the food. My sister and mother helped me with the lunch. My sister cooked the rice and my mother cooked the eggs.

After the lunch, I felt hurts in my hands. What's the wrong?: the chili peppers.

Pd: in this post. I speaked about REALLY chili peppers. And not about the musican band, Sorry.

Thanks for read this post.


Ahora esta lloviendo y yo voy a cocinar la cena. En la tarde, yo cocine una nueva receta, frijoles negros con sal, ajíes, pimentón, cebollín, cebolla y limón. A mi familia le gusto los frijoles negros. Pero no saben que use un limón para la comida. Mi hermana y mi madre me ayudaron con el almuerzo. Mi hermana cocino el arroz y mi madre cocino los huevos.

Después del almuerzo, yo sentí dolor en las manos. ¿Cuál es el problema?: los ajíes.

Pd: en este post hable sobre VERDADEROS ajíes. Y no sobre la banda musical, lo siento.

Gracias por leer este post.

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NRight now Iit's raining, and I'llm going to cook the dinner.

Tambien puedes escribir:

At the moment, it is raining. I'm going to cook dinner. Suena mejor así.

In the afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Black beans withblack bean recipe, which included salt, chili peppers, paprika, chives, onion, and lemon.

I notice lots of Spanish speakers learning English like to use a colon ":" when listing things, but that isn't always needed. It's not wrong per se, but I think it flows better as I corrected.

My family like theenjoyed my new black beans recipe.

To flow better, you could add an adjective in front of enjoyed to spice up the sentence, for example: thoroughly enjoyed or immensely enjoyed

But tThey doidn't know that I used a lemon forin the food.

Your OG sentence: Pero no saben que use un limón para la comida.

You are speaking in the past tense, so "don't know" should be "didn't know".

My sister and mother helped me with thprepare lunch.

"Prepare" better explains what exactly your mom and sis helped with in regards to lunch.

My sister cooked the rice and my mother cooked the eggs.

After the lunch, I felt hurts in my handspreparing lunch, my hands began to hurt.

What's the wprongblem?

I think what would make more sense with what you are trying to say:

Why did they start hurting? The chili peppers were to blame.

: the chili peppers.

Pd: ip.s. In this post., I referenced real chili peppers, not the band. Sorry!

Thanks for reading this post.

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Very well written. Just some small things. Everything you wrote makes sense. The edits I made would only make you sound more like a native English speaker.

Now It's raining, and I'll go to cook the dinner.

You could also say.....so instead of and.

In the afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Bblack beans with salt, chili peppers, paprika, chives, onions and lemons.

My family liked the black beans.

ButHowever, they don't know that I use ad lemon fors in the foodrecipe.

My sister and mother helped me with thmake lunch.

After the lunch, I felt hurts in my hands.

Now It's raining, and I'll go to cook the dinner.

It's raining now and time to cook dinner.

In the afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Black beans with salt, chili peppers, paprika, chives, onion and lemon.

Earlier this afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Black beans with salt, chili peppers, paprika, onion, chives and lemon.

My family like the black beans.

My family liked the black beans.

But they don't know that I use a lemon for the food.

Combine with the previous sentence:
My family liked the black beans but didn't know that I used any lemon.

My sister and mother helped me with the lunch.

My sister and mother helped with lunch.

My sister cooked the rice and my mother cooked the eggs.

After the lunch, I felt hurts in my hands.

After lunch, my hands started to hurt.

What's the wrong?

What happened?

: the chili peppers.

It was the chili peppers.

Pd: in this post.

Combining the sentences:
PS: In this post, I was talking about REAL chili peppers and not the band. Sorry.

Thanks for read this post.

Thanks for reading my post!

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Can you give me your recipe? I would like to make it.
If you want me to audio record these entries, I can do that.

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Lo escribiré en español para evitar errores.

Necesitas:
1/2 kilogramo de frijoles negros.
3 cebollines.
1 cebolla mediana.
1 pimentón grande.
2 cucharas de sal.
4 dientes de ajo.
6 ajíes pequeños.
1 limón pequeño.

Pones a calentar los frijoles a llama alta con dos litros de agua hasta que ablanden, le debes echar mas agua si se secan antes de ablandar; exprimes el limón encima de los frijoles y picas los demás ingredientes lo mas finos posibles y después se los echas a las frijoles; esperas cerca de 15 minutos antes de apagarlas (o mas tiempo si quieres que los frijoles estén mas espesos).

Algunas cosas que aclarar es que somos seis integrantes en mi familia y nos consumimos el medio kilo de frijoles como acompañamiento de las comidas en 2 días; otra cosa es que no tenemos olla de presión, si tu tienes una se te va a ser mas fácil; otro detalle es que los ajíes le dan un toque picante por lo que tendrías que echarle menos ajíes si no lo quieres tan picante, y por ultimo y mas IMPORTANTE es que el limón afecta mucho el sabor, es primordial que sea pequeño y lo mas fresco posible para que no te queden amargos los frijoles.

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jberhow

June 18, 2025

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¡Muchas gracias! Voy a probarlo este fin de semana.

Now It's raining, right now and I'llm going to cook the dinner.

In the afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Bblack beans with salt, chili peppers, paprika, chives, onion and lemon.

My family liked the black beans.,

Add -ed if we're talking about something in the past

Bbut they don't know that I used a lemon for the food.

After the lunch, I felt hurtspain in my hands.

hurt is doler verses pain is dolor

What's the wrong?

Pd: in this post.

I speaoked about REALLYactual chili peppers.

Some verbs in english change depending when using past tense instead of adding -ed

And not about the musican band, Ssorry.

Thanks for reading this post.

Feedback

Enjoyed your story, good job and keep going :)

And not about the musican band, Sorry.


And not about the musican band, Ssorry.

What's the wrong?


What's the wrong?

What's the wrong?

What happened?

What's the wprongblem?

I think what would make more sense with what you are trying to say: Why did they start hurting? The chili peppers were to blame.

Red Hot Chili Peppers


Now It's raining, and I'll go to cook the dinner.


Now It's raining, right now and I'llm going to cook the dinner.

Now It's raining, and I'll go to cook the dinner.

It's raining now and time to cook dinner.

Now It's raining, and I'll go to cook the dinner.

You could also say.....so instead of and.

NRight now Iit's raining, and I'llm going to cook the dinner.

Tambien puedes escribir: At the moment, it is raining. I'm going to cook dinner. Suena mejor así.

In the afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Black beans with salt, chili peppers, paprika, chives, onion and lemon.


In the afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Bblack beans with salt, chili peppers, paprika, chives, onion and lemon.

In the afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Black beans with salt, chili peppers, paprika, chives, onion and lemon.

Earlier this afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Black beans with salt, chili peppers, paprika, onion, chives and lemon.

In the afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Bblack beans with salt, chili peppers, paprika, chives, onions and lemons.

In the afternoon, I cooked a new recipe: Black beans withblack bean recipe, which included salt, chili peppers, paprika, chives, onion, and lemon.

I notice lots of Spanish speakers learning English like to use a colon ":" when listing things, but that isn't always needed. It's not wrong per se, but I think it flows better as I corrected.

My family like the black beans.


My family liked the black beans.,

Add -ed if we're talking about something in the past

My family like the black beans.

My family liked the black beans.

My family liked the black beans.

My family like theenjoyed my new black beans recipe.

To flow better, you could add an adjective in front of enjoyed to spice up the sentence, for example: thoroughly enjoyed or immensely enjoyed

But they don't know that I use a lemon for the food.


Bbut they don't know that I used a lemon for the food.

But they don't know that I use a lemon for the food.

Combine with the previous sentence: My family liked the black beans but didn't know that I used any lemon.

ButHowever, they don't know that I use ad lemon fors in the foodrecipe.

But tThey doidn't know that I used a lemon forin the food.

Your OG sentence: Pero no saben que use un limón para la comida. You are speaking in the past tense, so "don't know" should be "didn't know".

After the lunch, I felt hurts in my hands.


After the lunch, I felt hurtspain in my hands.

hurt is doler verses pain is dolor

After the lunch, I felt hurts in my hands.

After lunch, my hands started to hurt.

After the lunch, I felt hurts in my hands.

After the lunch, I felt hurts in my handspreparing lunch, my hands began to hurt.

: the chili peppers.


: the chili peppers.

It was the chili peppers.

: the chili peppers.

Pd: in this post.


Pd: in this post.

Pd: in this post.

Combining the sentences: PS: In this post, I was talking about REAL chili peppers and not the band. Sorry.

Pd: ip.s. In this post., I referenced real chili peppers, not the band. Sorry!

I speaked about REALLY chili peppers.


I speaoked about REALLYactual chili peppers.

Some verbs in english change depending when using past tense instead of adding -ed

Thanks for read this post.


Thanks for reading this post.

Thanks for read this post.

Thanks for reading my post!

Thanks for reading this post.

I told about REALLY chili peppers.


My sister and mother helped me with the lunch.


My sister and mother helped me with the lunch.

My sister and mother helped with lunch.

My sister and mother helped me with thmake lunch.

My sister and mother helped me with thprepare lunch.

"Prepare" better explains what exactly your mom and sis helped with in regards to lunch.

My sister cooked the rice and my mother cooked the eggs.


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