Jan. 1, 2025
Recording a trip with the first day
I had breakfast at McDonald's when I came to Shenzhen,I like this breakfast.I gone to Dafen Oil Painting Village,and Dafen Art Museum，there are many beautiful and exquisite paintings and pieces of china。
Perhaps I came too early so many shops were not open.
I went to Shenzhen Art Museum in the afternoon,many works are just amazing,I like them very much.
I had a cup of milk tea in the afternoon and it was really delicious.The brand I learned about at the first time.
I'm going to Xiamen now and I'm a bit excited. I hope everything goes well!
今天刚到深圳就去吃了麦当劳，我喜欢麦当劳的早餐。早上去了大芬油画村和大芬美术馆，里面很多好看的作品和瓷器。可能我过来的太早了，所以好多店都没开门。
下午去了深圳艺术馆，里面的作品每一幅都很震撼，我很喜欢。
在那里喝了一杯奶茶，味道很不错。第一次听说这个牌子。
现在要去厦门啦，有点兴奋，希望一切都顺利！
Recording a trip with the first day of a trip
I had breakfast at McDonald's when I came to Shenzhen,. I like this breakfast. I gonewent to Dafen Oil Painting Village, and Dafen Art Museum，t. There are many beautiful and exquisite paintings and pieces of china。
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Perhaps I came too early so many shops were not open.
Insert a blank space after each comma or period. This is much more important in English than in Chinese.
WRONG: I like cookies,cakes,pies and other sweets.They taste good to me.
RIGHT: I like cookies, cakes, pies and other sweets. They taste good to me.
I went to Shenzhen Art Museum in the afternoon,m. Many works are just amazing,. I like them very much.
I had a cup of milk tea in the afternoon and it was really delicious.The brand I learned about athe brand (of tea) for the first time.
I'm going to Xiamen now and I'm a bit excited.
I hope everything goes well!
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Recording a trip with the first day Recording |
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I had breakfast at McDonald's when I came to Shenzhen,I like this breakfast.I gone to Dafen Oil Painting Village,and Dafen Art Museum，there are many beautiful and exquisite paintings and pieces of china。 Perhaps I came too early so many shops were not open. I had breakfast at McDonald's when I came to Shenzhen Insert a blank space after each comma or period. This is much more important in English than in Chinese. WRONG: I like cookies,cakes,pies and other sweets.They taste good to me. RIGHT: I like cookies, cakes, pies and other sweets. They taste good to me. |
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I went to Shenzhen Art Museum in the afternoon,many works are just amazing,I like them very much. I went to Shenzhen Art Museum in the afternoon |
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I had a cup of milk tea in the afternoon and it was really delicious.The brand I learned about at the first time. I had a cup of milk tea in the afternoon and it was really delicious. |
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I'm going to Xiamen now and I'm a bit excited. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope everything goes well! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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