Sept. 23, 2025
Reconciliation in Canada
In Manitoba, and probably in other provinces, the speaker would read a few words announcing that they recognize the rights of Indigenous people and apologize for the harm caused by residential schools. I respect all the policy and law in this country, however, I personally do not used to this kind of announcement. That's too much for me, I really don't like to hear it everywhere. If I could, I would advise that this announcement can be made only at some special events, like National Day or sports games. I highly suspect this kind of apology has become annoying to some of indigenous people.
In Manitoba, and probably in other provinces, the speaker woulds read a few words announcing that they recognize the rights of Indigenous people and apologize for the harm caused by residential schools.
"the speaker would" sounds like you are talking about one speaker in the past. I changed it to "speakers" to refer to all speakers in general.
I respect all the policyies and laws in this country, however, I personally do, am not used to this kind of announcement.
policies and laws must be plural in this sentence.
am instead of do here.
If I could, I would advise that this announcement can be made only at some special events, like NationalCanada Day or sports games.
In Canada, the National Day is called "Canada Day"
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Yes, these acknowledgements are done all across Canada, to bring attention to the fact that we are on Indigenous Peoples traditional land, and to recognize the long lasting traumas brought to Indigenous Peoples with colonization.
Sept. 24, 2025
Thank you for your corrections!
Reconciliation in Canada
In Manitoba, and probably in other provinces, thea public speaker wouldill read a few words announcing that they recognize the rights of Iindigenous people and apologize for the harm caused by residential schools.
I respect all the policyies and laws in this country, however, I personally doam not used to this kind of announcement.
That'It’s too much for me, and I really don't like to hear it everywhere.
If I could, I would advise that this announcement can be made only at some special events, like National Day or sports games.
I highstrongly suspect this kind of apology has become annoying to some of indigenous people.
Sept. 23, 2025
Thanks for the corrections. It's been a while since I was here.
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In Manitoba, and probably in other provinces, the speaker would read a few words announcing that they recognize the rights of Indigenous people and apologize for the harm caused by residential schools. In Manitoba, and probably in other provinces, In Manitoba, and probably in other provinces, "the speaker would" sounds like you are talking about one speaker in the past. I changed it to "speakers" to refer to all speakers in general. |
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I respect all the policy and law in this country, however, I personally do not used to this kind of announcement. I respect all the polic I respect all the polic policies and laws must be plural in this sentence. am instead of do here. |
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That's too much for me, I really don't like to hear it everywhere.
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If I could, I would advise that this announcement can be made only at some special events, like National Day or sports games. If I could, I would advise that this announcement If I could, I would advise that this announcement In Canada, the National Day is called "Canada Day" |
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I highly suspect this kind of apology has become annoying to some of indigenous people. I |
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