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EllieGao

April 18, 2025

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Recently, I created ten grandkids in The Sims.

I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately.
I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as their god, creating their entire community.
Recently, I gave birth to ten grandkids in the Lu family (yes, I made it happen).
Honestly, I’m super proud of building such a strong, chaotic dynasty.

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I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately.

I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as their god, creating their entire community.

Honestly, I’m super proud of building such a strong, chaotic dynasty.

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That must be fun 😅😅😅

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EllieGao

April 20, 2025

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Hahaha... It's really fun

Recently, I created ten grandkids in The Sims.

I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately.

I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as their god, creating their entire community.

Recently, I gave birth to ten grandkids in the Lu family (yes, I made it happen).

Honestly, I’m super proud of building such a strong, chaotic dynasty.

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lolol all hail Ellie Gao! Our god, and saviour!

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EllieGao

April 18, 2025

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👑 I don’t make the rules... I am the rules.
The Lu bloodline shall thrive under my chaotic but loving reign 💅
10 grandkids and counting, baby!!
Hahaha!!!

Recently, I created ten grandkidschildren in The Sims.

“Grandkids” kind of sounds like something an older person would say.

I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately.

Okay, but how about: Recently I’ve been playing The Sims a lot.

I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as’m like their god, creating their entire community.

Recently, I gave birth to ten grandkids in the Lu family (yes, I made it happen).

Sticking with the ‘god voice,’ you could say something like: Recently, I granted the Lu family ten grandchildren.

Honestly, I’m super proud of building such a strong, chaotic dynasty.

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This made me laugh. Well done Sewer of Chaos.

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EllieGao

April 18, 2025

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Hahaha thank you, fellow chaos enthusiast!😈

I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as their god, creating their entire community.

Removing 'basically' makes you sound more confident and assertive in your writing, which might sound better if you are trying to emphasise your position, however, your sentence was still correct as is.

Recently, I gave birth tobrought ten grandkids into the Lu family in The Sims (yes, I made it happen).

Saying 'brought' instead of 'gave birth' clarifies the context a bit more, as well as specifying it was in The Sims, as as unlikely as it may be, someone may not understand and think you actually gave birth. However, your original sentence is still clear and understandable.

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I also love The Sims, so I know exactly what you mean! You have done well with this, and all your original sentences were clear, however, you had a few spots that you could have changed, but you still did very well! You are doing great!

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EllieGao

April 18, 2025

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Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm really glad to hear that you love The Sims too – it's such a fun game! I appreciate your feedback, and I’ll keep working on improving. Your encouragement means a lot!

Recently, I created ten grandkids in The Sims.


Recently, I created ten grandkidschildren in The Sims.

“Grandkids” kind of sounds like something an older person would say.

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I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately.


I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately.

Okay, but how about: Recently I’ve been playing The Sims a lot.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as their god, creating their entire community.


I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as their god, creating their entire community.

Removing 'basically' makes you sound more confident and assertive in your writing, which might sound better if you are trying to emphasise your position, however, your sentence was still correct as is.

I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as’m like their god, creating their entire community.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Recently, I gave birth to ten grandkids in the Lu family (yes, I made it happen).


Recently, I gave birth tobrought ten grandkids into the Lu family in The Sims (yes, I made it happen).

Saying 'brought' instead of 'gave birth' clarifies the context a bit more, as well as specifying it was in The Sims, as as unlikely as it may be, someone may not understand and think you actually gave birth. However, your original sentence is still clear and understandable.

Recently, I gave birth to ten grandkids in the Lu family (yes, I made it happen).

Sticking with the ‘god voice,’ you could say something like: Recently, I granted the Lu family ten grandchildren.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Honestly, I’m super proud of building such a strong, chaotic dynasty.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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