Sept. 17, 2025
Recent News
I’ll introduce recent news that I’m interested in.
It’s about attacking to Gaza city by Israel military forces. It has been continued for nearly two years. Honestly, I predicted that this war will end immediately when it started by Hamas. That’s because their military balances are not equal.
Personally, I strongly require them to stop this war what has no meaning.
最近のニュースで興味があるものを紹介します。
そのニュースはイスラエル軍によるガザ地下への攻撃です。これは約2年間も続いています。正直、ハマスによる攻撃当初、私はすぐにこの戦闘は終わると予測していました。なぜなら彼らのミリタリーバランスは同じレベルではないからです。
個人的には、意味のない戦争をやめるようイスラエルとハマスに強く求めます。
It’s about an attacking to on a Gaza city by Israeli military forces.
1. “It’s about attacking” is not correct. You should say “it’s about an attack” instead
2. If you are referring to people from a certain country or continent, you need to call them by their nationality, not the country. For example, people from America are called “Americans”, people from Japan are “Japanese” and people from Israel are “Israelis”
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1. Requiring something means you need something, and sounds unnatural here. A better way to say this would be that you believe they should stop
2. The word “what” is used wrong here. “That” should be used instead
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I’ll introduce recent news that I’m interested in.
It’s about attackings to Gazathe city of Gaza by Israel's military forces.
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That’s because their military balances arepower is not equal.
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It’s about attacking to Gaza city by Israel military forces. It’s It’s about an attack 1. “It’s about attacking” is not correct. You should say “it’s about an attack” instead 2. If you are referring to people from a certain country or continent, you need to call them by their nationality, not the country. For example, people from America are called “Americans”, people from Japan are “Japanese” and people from Israel are “Israelis” |
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Honestly, I predicted that this war will end immediately when it started by Hamas. Honestly, I predicted that this war w Honestly, I “I thought” sounds more natural than “I predicted” |
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Personally, I strongly require them to stop this war what has no meaning. Personally, I strongly Personally, I strongly 1. Requiring something means you need something, and sounds unnatural here. A better way to say this would be that you believe they should stop 2. The word “what” is used wrong here. “That” should be used instead |
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