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SummerTeaWater

May 29, 2021

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Reading Books

I am reading the 100th book which I have read this year.

After I have been trying to read e-books since last year, my reading speed is faster and faster.

Last year I even read more than 170 books.

I think reading e-books are more convenient than reading paper books, so I can read books anywhere and anytime.

E-books are cheaper and they don't need extra spaces to store.

Someday I want to read more than 1000 books, because someone said a man can change after reading more than 1000 books.

I want to know what will happen after that.

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Reading Books

I am reading themy 100th book which I have readfor thise year.

More idiomatic.

After I have beenstarted trying to read e-books since last year, my reading speed ishas become faster and faster.

"I have been trying" describes a situation in the present, not in the past, so it doesn't make sense to use it in this situation.

Last year I even read more than 170 books.

I think reading e-books areis more convenient than reading paper books, so: I can read booksthem anywhere and anytime.

The subject is "reading e-books," which is singular, not "e-books."
"So" implies that you are talking about a cause/effect relationship, but here, the second part is just expanding on the idea in the first part.
"Books" sounds like you are talking about reading any and every book. "Read them [=ebooks]" or "read" is better.

E-books are cheaper and they don't needrequire extra spaces to for storage.

"Don't need space" is also fine, but this sounds better to me.

Someday I want to read more than 1000 books, because someone said a man can change after reading more than 1000 books.

I want to know what will happen after that.

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SummerTeaWater

May 31, 2021

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Thank you very much!

Reading Books


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I am reading the 100th book which I have read this year.


I am reading themy 100th book which I have readfor thise year.

More idiomatic.

After I have been trying to read e-books since last year, my reading speed is faster and faster.


After I have beenstarted trying to read e-books since last year, my reading speed ishas become faster and faster.

"I have been trying" describes a situation in the present, not in the past, so it doesn't make sense to use it in this situation.

Last year I even read more than 170 books.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think reading e-books are more convenient than reading paper books, so I can read books anywhere and anytime.


I think reading e-books areis more convenient than reading paper books, so: I can read booksthem anywhere and anytime.

The subject is "reading e-books," which is singular, not "e-books." "So" implies that you are talking about a cause/effect relationship, but here, the second part is just expanding on the idea in the first part. "Books" sounds like you are talking about reading any and every book. "Read them [=ebooks]" or "read" is better.

E-books are cheaper and they don't need extra spaces to store.


E-books are cheaper and they don't needrequire extra spaces to for storage.

"Don't need space" is also fine, but this sounds better to me.

Someday I want to read more than 1000 books, because someone said a man can change after reading more than 1000 books.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to know what will happen after that.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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