Sept. 8, 2025
-Ragnar Stormbreaker
I was traveling to Orvam. It's a big city, not beutifull like capital city Pllegue, but good for contuning whit my career. It's a city of army and heros. And I am a young person who wont to by legent. But there was a problem...right in front of me...
"Gebrin! What do you mean that is 1.3. I was thinking that is 22.2!"
Gebrin took a big breath "And I was thinking that is 25.2 and the escarment is 5.3."
"Are you kiding me, everyone knows that escerament is 3.3 becouse it is a gregourus number and how happends that we can't remember some bleading date"
"becouse we are stupid knights" he smiled awkwardly. "and I now that we dont make it to Orvam in 2 days, but if we go though the Morawa.. We can do this cap."
I knew what that means...and I didnt like it but he was right. "you know that you have the moust stupid ideas i swear that one day someone will die becouse it"
He smiled at me like it was a compliment, then he turned around and schouted "lads we changet the way we will go through the swamps.
Then a heard the nowbie swallow in horror.
Ramndom story - qQueen of the sSwamps1
Just a few typos you made!
- Ragnar Stormbreaker
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I was traveling to Orvam.
It's a big city, not beautifull like capital city Pllegue, but good for contuning whitinuing my career.
Spelling mistakes
It's a city of army and heros.
No full stop as you are continuing.
Aand I am a young person who woants to bye a legent.d
I'm not sure what you wrote near the end, but I'll hazard a guess you meant this.
But there was a problem... right in front of me...
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"Gebrin!"
"What do you mean that is 1.3., it's 1.3 metres?"
Not sure what you meant here
"I was thinking that is 22.2thought it was 22.2 metres!"
Gebrin took a big breath, "And here I was thinking that it was 25.2 metres, and the escarpment iwas 5.3.!"
"Are you kidding me, e? Everyone knows that esceraarpment is 3.3 metres becoause it is a gGregourusrian number and how. It just so happends that we can't remember somthe bleaeding date."
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"It's becoause we are stupid knights." hHe smiled awkwardly.
Quite confusing here, I wasn't sure about these corrections as I didn't know what you were writing about.
"and I now that wWe dwon't make it to Orvam in 2 days, but if we go though the Morawa.. W.we can do this cCap."
Cap as in captain?
I knew what that meanst...and I didn't like it, but he was right.
"yYou know that you have the moust stupid ideas iright? I swear that one day someone will die becoause of it"
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He smiled at me like it was a compliment, then he turned around and schouted, "lLads we changetd the way wroute! We will go through the swamps. now."
Then a heard the no sound of a newbie swallowing in horror could be heard.
Ramdom story - queen of the swamps1 Ra Just a few typos you made! |
-Ragnar Stormbreaker I was traveling to Orvam. - Ragnar Stormbreaker |
It's a big city, not beutifull like capital city Pllegue, but good for contuning whit my career. It's a big city, not beautiful Spelling mistakes |
It's a city of army and heros. It's a city of army and heros No full stop as you are continuing. |
And I am a young person who wont to by legent.
I'm not sure what you wrote near the end, but I'll hazard a guess you meant this. |
But there was a problem...right in front of me... "Gebrin! But there was a problem |
What do you mean that is 1.3. "What do you mean Not sure what you meant here |
I was thinking that is 22.2!" "I |
Gebrin took a big breath "And I was thinking that is 25.2 and the escarment is 5.3." Gebrin took a big breath, "And here I was thinking that it was 25.2 metres, and the escarpment |
"Are you kiding me, everyone knows that escerament is 3.3 becouse it is a gregourus number and how happends that we can't remember some bleading date" "becouse we are stupid knights" he smiled awkwardly. "Are you kidding me Quite confusing here, I wasn't sure about these corrections as I didn't know what you were writing about. |
"and I now that we dont make it to Orvam in 2 days, but if we go though the Morawa.. We can do this cap." " Cap as in captain? |
Random story 1 - Queen of the Swamps |
I knew what that means...and I didnt like it but he was right. I knew what that mean |
"you know that you have the moust stupid ideas i swear that one day someone will die becouse it" He smiled at me like it was a compliment, then he turned around and schouted "lads we changet the way we will go through the swamps. " |
Then a heard the nowbie swallow in horror. The |
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