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Random story 1 - Queen of the Swamps

-Ragnar Stormbreaker
I was traveling to Orvam. It's a big city, not beutifull like capital city Pllegue, but good for contuning whit my career. It's a city of army and heros. And I am a young person who wont to by legent. But there was a problem...right in front of me...
"Gebrin! What do you mean that is 1.3. I was thinking that is 22.2!"
Gebrin took a big breath "And I was thinking that is 25.2 and the escarment is 5.3."
"Are you kiding me, everyone knows that escerament is 3.3 becouse it is a gregourus number and how happends that we can't remember some bleading date"
"becouse we are stupid knights" he smiled awkwardly. "and I now that we dont make it to Orvam in 2 days, but if we go though the Morawa.. We can do this cap."
I knew what that means...and I didnt like it but he was right. "you know that you have the moust stupid ideas i swear that one day someone will die becouse it"
He smiled at me like it was a compliment, then he turned around and schouted "lads we changet the way we will go through the swamps.
Then a heard the nowbie swallow in horror.

Corrections

Ramndom story - qQueen of the sSwamps1

Just a few typos you made!

- Ragnar Stormbreaker
I was traveling to Orvam.

It's a big city, not beautifull like capital city Pllegue, but good for contuning whitinuing my career.

Spelling mistakes

It's a city of army and heros.

No full stop as you are continuing.

Aand I am a young person who woants to bye a legent.d

I'm not sure what you wrote near the end, but I'll hazard a guess you meant this.

But there was a problem... right in front of me...
"Gebrin!
"

"What do you mean that is 1.3., it's 1.3 metres?"

Not sure what you meant here

"I was thinking that is 22.2thought it was 22.2 metres!"

Gebrin took a big breath, "And here I was thinking that it was 25.2 metres, and the escarpment iwas 5.3.!"

"Are you kidding me, e? Everyone knows that esceraarpment is 3.3 metres becoause it is a gGregourusrian number and how. It just so happends that we can't remember somthe bleaeding date."

"
It's becoause we are stupid knights." hHe smiled awkwardly.

Quite confusing here, I wasn't sure about these corrections as I didn't know what you were writing about.

"and I now that wWe dwon't make it to Orvam in 2 days, but if we go though the Morawa.. W.we can do this cCap."

Cap as in captain?

I knew what that meanst...and I didn't like it, but he was right.

"yYou know that you have the moust stupid ideas iright? I swear that one day someone will die becoause of it"
He smiled at me like it was a compliment, then he turned around and s
chouted, "lLads we changetd the way wroute! We will go through the swamps. now."

Then a heard the no sound of a newbie swallowing in horror could be heard.

Ramdom story - queen of the swamps1


Ramndom story - qQueen of the sSwamps1

Just a few typos you made!

-Ragnar Stormbreaker I was traveling to Orvam.


- Ragnar Stormbreaker
I was traveling to Orvam.

It's a big city, not beutifull like capital city Pllegue, but good for contuning whit my career.


It's a big city, not beautifull like capital city Pllegue, but good for contuning whitinuing my career.

Spelling mistakes

It's a city of army and heros.


It's a city of army and heros.

No full stop as you are continuing.

And I am a young person who wont to by legent.


Aand I am a young person who woants to bye a legent.d

I'm not sure what you wrote near the end, but I'll hazard a guess you meant this.

But there was a problem...right in front of me... "Gebrin!


But there was a problem... right in front of me...
"Gebrin!
"

What do you mean that is 1.3.


"What do you mean that is 1.3., it's 1.3 metres?"

Not sure what you meant here

I was thinking that is 22.2!"


"I was thinking that is 22.2thought it was 22.2 metres!"

Gebrin took a big breath "And I was thinking that is 25.2 and the escarment is 5.3."


Gebrin took a big breath, "And here I was thinking that it was 25.2 metres, and the escarpment iwas 5.3.!"

"Are you kiding me, everyone knows that escerament is 3.3 becouse it is a gregourus number and how happends that we can't remember some bleading date" "becouse we are stupid knights" he smiled awkwardly.


"Are you kidding me, e? Everyone knows that esceraarpment is 3.3 metres becoause it is a gGregourusrian number and how. It just so happends that we can't remember somthe bleaeding date."

"
It's becoause we are stupid knights." hHe smiled awkwardly.

Quite confusing here, I wasn't sure about these corrections as I didn't know what you were writing about.

"and I now that we dont make it to Orvam in 2 days, but if we go though the Morawa.. We can do this cap."


"and I now that wWe dwon't make it to Orvam in 2 days, but if we go though the Morawa.. W.we can do this cCap."

Cap as in captain?

Random story 1 - Queen of the Swamps


I knew what that means...and I didnt like it but he was right.


I knew what that meanst...and I didn't like it, but he was right.

"you know that you have the moust stupid ideas i swear that one day someone will die becouse it" He smiled at me like it was a compliment, then he turned around and schouted "lads we changet the way we will go through the swamps.


"yYou know that you have the moust stupid ideas iright? I swear that one day someone will die becoause of it"
He smiled at me like it was a compliment, then he turned around and s
chouted, "lLads we changetd the way wroute! We will go through the swamps. now."

Then a heard the nowbie swallow in horror.


Then a heard the no sound of a newbie swallowing in horror could be heard.

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