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SummerTeaWater

May 20, 2021

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Raining at Night

It's raining at night.
Unlike the rain that falls during the day, the rain that falls at night gives a quiet and calm feeling.
I love reading books at my desk while listening to the sound of rain.
The quiet sound of rain and warm stories make me feel comfortable.
It's a happy reading time.

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Raining at Night

It's raining at night.

Unlike the rain that falls during the day, the rain that falls at night gives me a quiet and calm feeling.

I love reading books at my desk while listening to the sound of rain.

The quiet sound of rain and the warm stories make me feel comfortable.

Writing 'The quiet sound of rain and warm stories' might make it seem that the 'sound' of the warm stories is what makes the narrator feel comfortable. Changing this part could make it clearer for the reader. :)

It's a happy reading timegreat time to read.

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SummerTeaWater

May 21, 2021

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The quiet sound of rain and the warm stories make me feel comfortable.

I got it. Thank you very much!

Raining at Night


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It's raining at night.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Unlike the rain that falls during the day, the rain that falls at night gives a quiet and calm feeling.


Unlike the rain that falls during the day, the rain that falls at night gives me a quiet and calm feeling.

I love reading books at my desk while listening to the sound of rain.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The quiet sound of rain and warm stories make me feel comfortable.


The quiet sound of rain and the warm stories make me feel comfortable.

Writing 'The quiet sound of rain and warm stories' might make it seem that the 'sound' of the warm stories is what makes the narrator feel comfortable. Changing this part could make it clearer for the reader. :)

It's a happy reading time.


It's a happy reading timegreat time to read.

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