May 15, 2026
Do social media have more advantages or disadvantages?
(please feel free to not only correct my (grammar) mistakes but also to wright more suitable vocabulary and phrases. I need to improve my English skills to C1-Level)
Social media is a very powerful tool these days.
It allows to get in contact with almost the whole world. You can stay in contact with your friends, even if they're on the other side of the planet.
Also you can gain new friendships and even new work-relationships.
Some people find their dream job trough social media, for others social media is their dream job.
But social media platforms are not always as shiny as the may seems.
On social media everybody wants to impress, and so they just show the best sides of their lives, jobs, holidays or even of their bodies.
Especially the last point can be very dangerous for our younger users. Because if they compare each other with fake bodies, and fake faces they want to become like them. They get like a blindness if they're confronted with these pictures every day and that means that they're no longer able to recognize what is fake and what is real.
This can lead to conditions such as eating disorders or diabetes.
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(please feel free to not only correct my (grammar) mistakes but also to wrighte more suitable vocabulary and phrases.
(please feel free to not only correct my (grammar) mistakes but also to write more suitable vocabulary and phrases.
I need to improve my English skills to C1-La C1 level).
I need to improve my English skills to a C1 level.
Social media is a very powerful tool these days. Social media is a very powerful tool these days.
It allows us to get in contact with almost the whole world. It allows us to get in contact with almost the whole world.
You can stay in contact with your friends, even if they're on the other side of the planet. You can stay in contact with your friends, even if they're on the other side of the planet.
Also yYou can also gain new friendships, and even new work- relationships.
You can also gain new friendships, and even new work relationships.
Some people find their dream job through social media, for others social media is their dream job. Some people find their dream job through social media, for others social media is their dream job.
But social media platforms are not always as shinygreat as they may seems.
But social media platforms are not always as great as they may seem.
On social media everybody wants to impress, and so they just show the best sides of their lives, jobs, holidays or even of their bodies.
On social media everybody wants to impress, and so they just show the best sides of their lives, jobs, holidays or even their bodies.
Because if they compare each other with fake bodies, and fake faces, they want to become like them. Because if they compare each other with fake bodies, and fake faces, they want to become like them.
They get like awill become blindness if they're confronted with these pictures every day, and that means that they're no longer able to recognize what is fake and what is real.
They will become blind if they're confronted with these pictures every day, and that means that they're no longer able to recognize what is fake and what is real.
This isn't really an idiom that is used in English as far as I know, but I couldn't think of another one so I just corrected your grammar.
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Your English is great! However, you have a lot of run-on sentences. Try to be mindful about breaking up your longer sentence with periods (.) and commas (,).
(pPlease feel free to not only correct my (grammar) mistakes but also to wrighte more suitable vocabulary and phrases.
(Please feel free to not only correct my grammar mistakes but also to write more suitable vocabulary and phrases.
I need to improve my English skills to C1-Level)
I need to improve my English skills to C1-Level
My goal is to reach C1-Level in English.
Social media is a very powerful tool these days.
It allows us to get in contact with almost everyone in the whole world. It allows us to get in contact with almost everyone in the whole world.
You can stay in contact with your friends, even if they're on the other side of the planet.
Also you can gain new friendships and even new work-relationships.
Some people find their dream job through social media, for others social mediabeing a content creator is their dream job.
Some people find their dream job through social media, for others being a content creator is their dream job.
But social media platforms are not always as shinyattractive as ithe may seemslook.
But social media platforms are not always as attractive as it may look.
On social media everybody wants to impress, and so they just show the best sides of their lives, jobs, holidays or even of their bodies.
This can lead to conditions such as eating disorders or diabetes.
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Social media is a very powerful tool these days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Social media is a very powerful tool these days. Social media is a very powerful tool these days. |
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It allows to get in contact with almost the whole world. It allows us to get in contact with almost everyone in the whole world. It allows us to get in contact with almost everyone in the whole world. It allows us to get in contact with almost the whole world. It allows us to get in contact with almost the whole world. |
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You can stay in contact with your friends, even if they're on the other side of the planet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! You can stay in contact with your friends, even if they're on the other side of the planet. You can stay in contact with your friends, even if they're on the other side of the planet. |
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Also you can gain new friendships and even new work-relationships. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Some people find their dream job trough social media, for others social media is their dream job.
Some people find their dream job through social media, for others Some people find their dream job through social media, for others social media is their dream job. Some people find their dream job through social media, for others social media is their dream job. |
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But social media platforms are not always as shiny as the may seems.
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But social media platforms are not always as |
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On social media everybody wants to impress, and so they just show the best sides of their lives, jobs, holidays or even of their bodies. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
On social media everybody wants to impress, and so they just show the best sides of their lives, jobs, holidays or even |
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Especially the last point can be very dangerous for our younger users. |
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Because if they compare each other with fake bodies, and fake faces they want to become like them. Because if they compare each other with fake bodies, and fake faces, they want to become like them. Because if they compare each other with fake bodies, and fake faces, they want to become like them. |
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They get like a blindness if they're confronted with these pictures every day and that means that they're no longer able to recognize what is fake and what is real.
They This isn't really an idiom that is used in English as far as I know, but I couldn't think of another one so I just corrected your grammar. |
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This can lead to conditions such as eating disorders or diabetes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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